How can you say you know me
When you’ve only seen my skin
And not the untamed world
Hidden deep within
You bring treats when I lose
Act like you can’t see me sad
You think that I can’t see through you
That you’re actually glad
All you do is drain me
All you do is just take
At first I overlooked it
But now I know what’s at stake
You talk all the way along
And its always all about you
And when you realise that I don’t pay heed
Those fake rumours are spread too
When I am too angry
You blame for everything
Well, if you think my winter’s too cold
You don’t deserve my spring
Super impressive.
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Thank you so much ma’am!
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Last two lines are beautiful.
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Thanks a lot!
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🤗🤗
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Excellent dear keep it up !!!
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Thanks a lot! Glad you like it 😄💐
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It’s easy to identify the fake ones when situations turn cold. So, true. Good one, Akshita!
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True, agreed
Thank you so much!
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Well expressed!
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Thank you!
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My pleasure.
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Epic🎱👽👌🏾
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Thank you!
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You so good at expressing topics and thoughts in such thought out poems 🙂 👌
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Thank you so much! Means a lot to me☺💐
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Beautifully written 💚
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Thank you!
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I so so so very much like this 🙂
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Thank you so so so very much!
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🙂
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Fake friends are the worst. Having no friends is better than that!
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I so so agree with you!
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Oh yes.. let this be a tight slap on the face of all Impostors !!!
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Thank you!
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🙂 🙂
Welcome !!
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Penned beautifully🖤🧚♀
I believe breakup with friends is so hurtful compared with a love (couples) relation breakups🙂
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Agreed. Thank you!☺💐
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Wow beautifully expressed poem❤️
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Thank you😊💐
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You’ve nailed the entire poem in the last two lines, well done. 🙂
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Thank you so much! 😊💐
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You are welcome, Akshita. 🙂
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The last two lines are awesome! Fake friends teach real-good lessons !
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Agreed. Thank you so much 😊💐
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Damn good.
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Thank you 🙂
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beautifully penned!!
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Thanks a lot!
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My pleasure 🤗🤗
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🤯🤯 that was too good. Seriously, I felt that
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Thank you so much! Glad you like it 😊
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“How can you say you know me
When you’ve only seen my skin”
Deep. Awesome lines
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Thank you so much! Glad you like it 😊💐
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Nicely expressed!
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Thanks a lot!
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Good work !
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Thank you!
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if you think my winter’s too cold
You don’t deserve my spring love these lines .👍👏
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Thank you so much! Glad you like it 😊💐
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Yes indeed ! No words wud b the better options .
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😊💐
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Wonderful job!!
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Thanks a lot!
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Lovely!! Expressed wonderfully!!
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Thank you so much !😊
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Pleasure!! 😊
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We meet fake friends at some point of our lives. They show that they care about you but that’s false. Actions should speak louder than words but with them it’s vice versa. It’s a splendid poem and very relatable.🥺💕
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Thank you so much! Glad you could resonate 😊💐
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