I seek calm in the foldings of rose
The feelings of relaxation, it does arose
The velvet like petal gives a sense of calm
The soft sleeping ground provides a balm
The sweet smell filles my senses
The soft colour gives pleasure, immense
I slide down on the carpet of pink
Of what lies below, I don’t think
It’s a rose; there’s a forewarn
Yet, there’s a prick; I have reached the thorns
Nothing’s completely golden, nothing’s completely dull
The chances of exceptions are null
It is neither bitter nor is it sweet
Everything’s simply bittersweet
Thank you so much 🌈
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Nice poem ❤️
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Amazing 👍👏
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Thank you so much!
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Nice poem🌹
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Thank you so much 💐
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Very beautifully penned ✍️💕
Don’t forget to Glee and spread Sparkles ✨
-Nani 💖
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Thank you so much!
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The beauty of rose is accentuated by your words. I loved the comforting and calming description.
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Thanks a lott!!
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Love this!! 😊❤💙💚💛💜
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Am glad you did ✨😊
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I came here cause you called me smart. It left a bitter sweet taste in my mouth
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
BUT NEVER GROW BITTER, SWEETIES! 😀
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Thank you so much 😊✨
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Beautifully written ! 💖
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Thank you!
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Hi Akshita, I have nominated you for ‘The Lockdown Tag’. Here is the link
https://believestrong.wordpress.com/2020/08/15/the-lockdown-tag/
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Loved it 😍 – Yet, there’s a prick; I have reached the thorns.
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Thank you so much 😊✨
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WOW.
“Everything’s simply bittersweet.”
So poetic and beautiful♥️
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I am glad you liked it
Thank you 😊✨
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“It is neither bitter nor is it sweet
Everything’s simply bittersweet” 👌👌
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Thanks a lot 😊✨
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oh em gee! i had just written a little piece with the same name!!
❤
i loved this piece. it's great!
love always,
[gotw}
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That’s great
Thank you so much !!
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Beautifully written!!!
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Thanks a lot!
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My pleasure 😃😃
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so beautiful! bitter sweet!!
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Thank you!
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You’re so welcome!
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Beautifully written. Always wondered whether the rose was there to forewarn about the thorn or the other way around. Since rose could be bitter or it could be sweet.
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Yes.
Nice perception
Thank you
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Life’s nothing without a mix of emotions. Wonderful verse!
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Indeed.
Thank you so much 😊👆
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Ohh wow!! I love the rose!! this is definitely a favourite!! 😍😍💕
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Thank you so much 😊🌈
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I loved the comparison. Everything in life is bittersweet indeed
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Indeed. Thank you!
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You are always welcome, Akshita 🙂
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I really liked the flow of the poem from the smell and the sense of velvet petals to the pricky thorns. 👌👌
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Thank you 😊🌈
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You have amazingly penned this one ❤️
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Thank you so much!
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Amazing!!
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Thank you 🌈
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The pleasure is all mine!
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😊✨
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mmmm…sweet like chocolate
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😊
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😊 many things in life are bittersweet 😊nice poem
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Indeed.
Thank you so much 😊🌌
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