Part 2
Claire was shocked, surprised and confused
Even after this she was amused
She looked forward to complete the story
And return home with all her glory
They’ll have a tourney every night
Only those will be saved who have performed it right
Let me tell you, she was the eldest of the twelve
Taking care of our her younger sisters, was also on her shelf
The first night it was, they went to the sacred place
From where they were transported to the tourney’s place
And lo and behold! There were 12 giant swans
To take them across the lake where they’d be pawns
An announcement was made
The rules of that night it clearly displayed
It would be a treasure hunt, the first time
They’d have to find 12 worthy dimes
It sounds easy, ain’t I right?
But it isn’t what it seems, it’s quite a plight
They have to search in a castle, which is falling part by part
In a fixed time too (They clasp their heart)
Claire heads towards the staircase that takes them upstairs
When the 6th sister finds one behind a chair
The first step fell down, they’d have to jump now
And the 11th sister finds another beneath a bow
They jump up and just then it starts crumbling down
Moreover they are wearing heavy gowns
The 5th and 2nd sister find two on the railing
The others head up to search, paling
The pillars are crashing, they have to hurry
All of them start to worry
When a large portrait falls on the 12th and 3rd sister’s arm
But behind it there are two dimes that save them from harm
The ones who have found them are transported back to the lake
And the others put their lives at stake
Everything around them was now falling down
Claire’s arm had been slashed with a sword, there fell down a crown
It contained their other dimes, they were relieved
This tourney’s challenge they had achieved
The returned to the palace, bruised and tired
Almost each one of them to their bed had retired
Claire wanted to know, why they had to do this
About this there was something amiss
Rhyming words and your storytelling is great… About to read the next part!
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Glad you like it ✨
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Good read!
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Thank you so much ✨
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12 sisters oh my what a time!
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Yeah, quite back in time😀
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Right! I just wish I had had one!
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Oh..
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You are so creative OMG!! I am absolutely loving this!! And now I want a movie/series on THIS version!! ♥️
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Thank you so much ✨ This comment brought a smile to my face 😄
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Yay!! You are most welcome!!😍❤
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Have a good day ahead ✨
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You too❤
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ikr! who needs the original ones… xD!
which is your favorite princess from the Disney posse? mine’s Mulan.
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XD
Hmmm….probably Moana!
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ooh, nice!
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I’m speechless😶
You should do this as a job😋
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Thank you so much✨ That’s high praise😄
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yup😜😜😜
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Have a good day ahead 😄💐
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Loved it, Akshita 💙
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Thank you so much 😊✨
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Anytime ☺☺
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Oh a dripping poem. I loved this one, Akshita
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Thank you so much 😊✨
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Good one, Akshita!
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Thank you so much✨
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You’re most welcome!
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whoooo, nice! i am LOVING this concept. the way you rhyme your words is commendable. looking forward to more!!!
🖋️📝✍🏽
love always,
[gotw}
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Thank you sooo much! I am so glad to know that😊✨
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Love it, Akshita!
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Thank you so much, Rishika!✨
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🤗💛✨
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I read a few here and there about the princesses but you’re the one who is educating me about them. This is how a story should be told too.
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I am very happy to know that. Thank you.✨
Hope you enjoy it😊
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I enjoyed the gory slashing 😃
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😅👍
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I too liked the way you have described it .. a story so well told Akshita 😊
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Thanks a lot ma’am ✨
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Stay tuned for the other parts :))
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I am.
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👍
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