There’s thunder, dark clouds envelop the sky
Away to home, the birds fly
The blue parts go into solitude
Rain is what it brews
I step out to greet it
The wet green bed kisses my feet
The drops of rain fall down
I can’t help but wonder if they are tears of mirth or frown
They fall in a puddle, with soft pops
Creating ripples, the insects hop
I guess negative into negative
Does give a positive
For I seek solace in a storm
When there’s one raging inside me
Oh man, that ending was so fab!!!! 😍
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Thank youuuu!
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Yes, negative + negative = positive, which doesn’t explain why this poem is so wonderful.
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I am glad you agree. Thank you so much 😊✨
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Nice.
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Thank you 😊
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🤩
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😊💐
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What a amazing pome 👍🏻👍🏻👌🏻🤩
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Thank you so much 😊🌈
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Wow the last four lines are exquisite! 😇💕
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Thank you so much 🌈
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‘For I seek solace in a storm
When there’s one raging inside me’ 💚💙 Loved these lines!
Wow! So beautifully penned.
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Thank you so much 😊✨
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Wow… beautiful…I can feel your poem !❤️
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Thank you✨😊
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The last line was icing on the cake 🌪️🌀🌩️⛈️
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Thank you so much 😊🌈
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Wow. Akshita, I’m spellbound.
I guess negative into negative
Does give a positive
For I seek solace in a storm
When there’s one raging inside me
I loved these lines. Beautifully penned ♥️
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That’s high praise. Thank you so much 🤗✨
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My pleasure 🙂
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Have a good day ahead!
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Those last 2 lines entirely changes the mood of the poem..
Well written Akshita 🙂
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Thank you! I am glad you liked it 😊✨
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🙂 🙂 🙂
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Have a good day ahead!
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You too !! 😀😀
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Beautifully written✨
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Thank you so much!
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Beautiful as always 💙
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Thank you so much 🤗✨
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Pleasure is all mine 🤗😊
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Last line takes it to another level. Very well penned Akshita.
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Thank you ma’am. I am glad✨
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Well penned😍
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Thanks a lott 😊✨
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The last line is golden!! 👏🏽👏🏽
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Thank you🤗✨
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Very beautifully written 👏 👌 ❤
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Thank you so much 😊🌈
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The last line 🤩
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Thank you, Rishika 😊🌈
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😊
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Well penned✍️
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Thank you so much 🌈
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Always my pleasure 😇 and have a great day!!
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You too!😊
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+ve vibes! 🥰
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Thank you 😊✨
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Lovely!
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Thank you 🤗🌈
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Storm raging within has resulted in a beautiful poetry 😊❤️
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Thank you so much 😊✨
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Beautiful poem ❤️
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Thank you so much 🌈
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