
Taking a stroll, you find a flower quite pretty
It’s purple with a tinge of blue
Its unique, you’re taken aback
In a mundane life there’s something new
You go near it and admire
It looks back with a full bloom
As if smiling very cheerfully
In that sight there’s no gloom
You pluck it, bring it closer to your eyes
To see its petal up and close
Suddenly a friend calls you and waves
Your finger on the petal has froze
The flower falls down
And you don’t remember it
Care to know what happened next?
The story, I ‘ll continue it
After a few minutes, it lays smashed
On a dirty road
People continue to walk over it
So do insects and toads
Your intention was probably not wrong
For it did not have any repercussion on you
But ever thought about the repurcussion on the receiver of your action
That you probably did not do
Very thoughtful.
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Omg wowow!! So amazing!!😍
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Thank you so much 😊
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Wow! Beautiful, Akshita
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Thank you so much ma’am 😊🌈
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Well written. 👏
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Thank you so much 😊✨
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Have a good day ahead!!
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Wow…i love this..
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Thank you so much 😊✨
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Tooooo good👌🏻👍🏻😘
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Thank you 🙂
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Fantastic👌👌
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Thank you so much🤗✨
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epicc!
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Thank you 😀✌
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Oh wow. Even a small seemingly tiny action can have a lot of impact
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That’s exactly what I wanted to say🙂
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It’s a beautiful message, conveyed so beautifully 🤗
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Thank you🤗🌈
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Wowww….. In such a miraculous way you have made a very accurate description about the life of a flower. What exactly is the life of a flower, I got to read in your creation.
Really amazingly described…..👌👌👏👏👏
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I am so happy to know that it had that kind of an effect. Thank you so much💐
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Yes, in this you have put the biography of a flower in a different way in your wonderful words. I wanted to read something new and something different, and I found everything I needed in this poem.😊👌
It can also be called a wonderful art.🤩👏👌
And it’s my pleasure🤗😊
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I am very happy to hear that 💐
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The story is so realistic and makes me realise…!!
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I am happy it had that effect
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toooooooo good!
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Thank you ,gotw😊✨
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