Hush, keep it a secret
I know yours, I won’t reveal
Keep mine in your heart’s sturdiest pocket
I promise you, you won’t regret
They all saw the funeral
Hush, keep it a secret
They believe you’re dead
Killed by a heart attack
Hush, keep it a secret
It was choking, from a nugget
What brought that on? Lies between us
Hush, keep it a secret
These occurrences with me are quite frequent
Who put that poison coated gold in your food?
Hush, keep it a secret
I know the culprit, you too do I bet
One knows oneself the best
So, hush keep it a secret
Hush, keep it a secret
This is unique🤩 Loved it Akshita!
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I am glad you did
Thank you so much 🤗✨
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Pleasure😊
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‘Amazing Pice’
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😊💐
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Can I ask what is the message you wanted to convey? I may be interpreting it the wrong way😅.
But honestly, I already love it so much😍😍
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I actually left the conclusion to the reader…”One knows oneself the best” so the culprit is either the narrator or the victim himself or maybe even both of us😶
And thank you so much
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Oh wow, that’s a really nice way of presenting it 😀.
My pleasure 😊
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Thanks again😄
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You’re welcome 😙
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Akshita, I love it! The repetition is absolutely wonderful.
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Thank you so much! I am so happy to hear that 😊
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Beautiful poem Akshita 🙂
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Thank you 😊
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Secret, it’s deep
Good one 😊
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This poem is beautiful . I really admire your work! Keep it up❤️
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Thank you so much, Disha!!
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Awesome!
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Thanks a lot!!
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Amazing piece
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Thank you!!
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This is good
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Thanks!
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*whispers ok, I’m good with secrets*😯
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😮
Thanks for reading 😊
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Hush, this is good 🙂
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Thank you 😊
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