I used to hold onto things too tight
Thought it made me brave, and everything alright
My fingers would ache holding onto the past
But I thought it was worth the pain it cast
Would remember my mistakes every time the wind blew
The pain would hit me anew
Yet I held onto it tightly
Even if it blistered my fingers slightly
Then one day a thing happened
Something I never imagined
I let go of the past, I held so dear
It filled me with happiness, instead of fear
Sometimes its good to lose something
For it isn’t always meant to be a loss
The last two lines were magic❤
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Thank you!
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Letting go isn’t always a loss indeed as it can bring such joy and happiness and you kinda just feel free (does this make sense😅)
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It perfectly makes sense and I agree to each word here
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😁❤
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wow, such a wonderful message wrapped in rhyme. good work there akshita !!
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Thank you so much!😊
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Beautifully put, Akshita 💛💛….”For it isn’t always meant to be a loss”.
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Thank you so much!😊💐
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Wonderful 👏👏❤❤
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Thank you so much!!😄
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Noice Akshita!! Loved it!!!
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Thanksss!!😃
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True that! 👍😊
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Thanks!
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such a great poem in letting go!
Nice Akshita!💖❤️
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Thanks!!😄😄😄
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💖
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I could relate to this. Lerting go is the best thing to do in life but sometimes it’s the hardest thing.
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That’s true coz the best thing is nevr the easiest🙂
Thanks for reading and sharing your valuable views!
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Absolutely
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Beautifully release and beautifully written Akshita 💜
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Thank you, Bree!
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Butterflies
Flutter Free
Value Of Cocoon
Patient Caterpillars
All Miles They
Walk to
Go to
PriSon
AWaKinG Reformed🦋
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True that
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😊🙌🎼
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That’s rightly said dear Akshita. Sometimes it’s good to lose something, for it’s not always a loss. Beautifully penned ❤️🤗
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Thank you so much, Preeths! Glad you like it😄
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This is so beautiful Akshita. Sometimes letting go of the past is really important!
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Yes!
Thank you!😊
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Lovely work!!
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Thanks, Kim!!😄
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Ikr!! Wonderful poem! Sometimes letting go is healthy ❤️
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Exactly!
Thank you so much, Ashmita!!
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Welcome akshita!
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Could relate to this so well Akshita. Letting go is what one needs to practice to invite happiness 😊💙
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Indeed
Thank you!
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Losing something isn’t always meant to be a loss … this connected with me so well Akshita .. beautiful ❤️❤️❤️
I think I should soon go back to your old posts and read them all 😍😍😍
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Thank you soo much, HS!
Haha, I’ll be glad if you do🤗
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❤️
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Well written. I loved it.
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Thank you so much for your appreciation!
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So true!!! It changed my mind😌
Thanks a lot
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Thanks a lot! I am so happy to know that 🤗💓
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Let go of the past. Live the present.
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That’s what we actually need to do. Thanks for reading and giving your feedback sir 😊🌼
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My pleasure! And please don’t call me sir. 🙂
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😀🌼
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It reminds me of the song Let It Be by The Beatles.
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Happy to know that
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Very soulful.
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Thanks a lot! Hv a good day ahead 🤗💐
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Pleasure reading 🙂
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😀🌹
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i love it❤
beautifully written
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Thank you soooo much Prisha!❤Have a great day💐
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Once you let it go some thing will surely gonna com with pure blessing 😀.Stay alive and alert to accept.
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Agreed. Thanks for giving it a read and sharing your views your views🌸
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It is indeed. Sometimes we need to let go the past as like we let go of a air ballon slip from our hands. And we do that we feel ourselves to be lighten up.
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True. Thanks for reading😊
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This is incredible poem, Akshita….
“I let go of the past, I held so dear
It filled me with happiness, instead of fear
Sometimes its good to lose something
For it isn’t always meant to be a loss”
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Thank you so much! Glad you liked it 🙂
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It was my pleasure reading it 😊
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😇💐
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It can be such a relief to let go of the past and start living in the present. Beautifully written ♥️
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It sure can be. Thanks a lot. Glad you like it😊❣
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So true, the liberation from letting go of hurts!
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It does…
Thanks for giving it a read and sharing your views
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Nice poem !!! Sometimes letting go is the best solution.
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It sure is
Thank you so much!
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Most welcome !!!
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Let in
Let go
Let live
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Beautiful lines you have written…
Thanks for giving it a read
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Amazing poem 😊
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Glad you like it😇🤗
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😊😊
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🤗💐🌸❤
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I loveeeeedddd this piece, it was amazing, mindblowing and outstanding and it could be connected with on so many levels and believes, beautiful and versatile indeed especially the rhyming man it was so on point……💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞
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Thank you so much for your appreciation!
Glad you liked it♡
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True that 👍🏻 Sometimes letting go is good for both the sides
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You got it right..
Thanks for giving it a read and sharing your views😊
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