
As thoughts swirl, I watch the rain
They run around, dominate my brain
Those soft tears of grief or mirth
Shedded by nature to clean the dirt
You could just stand and watch them
For an eternity, just look at them falling on stems
When I dig deeper into their meaning
The results are astonishing
There's no promise in there
They might hit the ground, or just evaporate into thin air
They are vulnerable just like me
The realization sets me free
It's so good to know
That to be vulnerable is to be brave
I loved the last lines the most! ❤ I completely agree. Accepting one’s own vulnerabilities helps liberating a lot of emotional burden. I also liked the imagery you’ve used here, those comparisons with rain!
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Thank you so much! And i agree accepting the fact that we are vulnerable lifts a weight from our shoulders
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Hey, I completely agree with ya! To be vulnerable is to be brave, They’re people who don’t run away from their feelings 🙂
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Indeed. Thank you for reading!
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Thanks, I hope you enjoy my posts as much as I like yours 🙂
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Beauuuuuutiful! Loved the ending ..
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Thank you so much, HS!!🤗💐💐
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Oh wow!!! You always end your poems with a bang. Adore the last line💕
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Haha, thanks!!😊
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Needed this, Akshita! I think we all need to realise this, amazing ❤️
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Indeed. Thanks dearie😊
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Beautiful poem this is amazing ❤️ my favourite line is ‘That to be vulnerable is to be brave’ that last line just gets me it’s ever so magnificent Akshita 💗💖❤️✨
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Thank you so much, Maya!! I am so happy to hear that!
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Your welcome, anytime 🙏🏼 💗💕💖
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My word what a powerful piece Akshita and as everyone else has said… That last line… Your thoughts are wrote it perfectly 👏👏👏
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Thank you so much, Bree!! Iam so happy to hear that 😊💐
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It’s absolutely a great writing…the last line is beyond magnificent ❤️✨
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Thank you so much, glad you like it 💐
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You’re welcome Akshita ✨
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Love the reference of rain you have used! A very thoughtful and inspiring poem! 🌸
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Thanks a lot for reading and sharing your valuable views!!🙂
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I loved the last line. This whole post os so meaningful. Amazing writing Akshita
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Thank you so much!!
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I loved loved loved the last line!
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Thank you, thank you, thank you 🤗💐💐
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Thank God I limited to only three!😆
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😂😂
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This is so deep!💙
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Thanks, BG!!
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The last lines are ❤❤❤
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Thank you!!
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The ending is!!!!!!!!!!*fire emoji*
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Thank you !!!!
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One of the best poem I read today. ❤️❤️
Very beautiful poem dear Akshita ❤️
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Thank you dear, Preeths😊💐💐
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Outstanding work 👏🏻😍😘👍🏻👌🏻
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Thanks!!
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Woah! The ending is awesome! The brave feel sad or scared too. This makes them human! But what makes them different is there ability to overcome it.😊
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Indeed.
Thank you so much!
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Ah The Little
Synchronicities
Of Life Dear Akshita
It’s Raining NoW WHere
i Am Thunder Booming
Echoing Away Morning
Light Other Than What
Lightning Brings True
Through All Colors
Of Life i Create Now
Nostalgia For The
Dark
Parts
Where
All i Am
Is lost in
Echoes of
Thunder And
Rain Hitting
The Roof
True When
We Are
Only
Thunder
And Rain
It Sounds So
Loud It’s All We
May
Hear
Lost in Thunder
And Rain So One
Day We May Color
Lightning New
For
What
We Bloom
Next Thorns
And Flowers
Create RiSinG Roses
How Lightning Colors
Soul With Spirit of
Thunder
HeARTS
FeeLinG
SenSinG Art😊🙌🎼
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True…even rain pattering down is like music to my ears
Thank you for reading!
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Always A
Pleasure
With SMiles😊🙌
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Woah.. what a ending!! ❤️
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Thank you so much!😊💐💐
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The last line!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Thank you, Taylor Alan!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Profound words Akshita ❤️
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Thank you ma’am!
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Impactful 🙌
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Thanks!!
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It’s so meaningful.. I mean….
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Glad you like it, Poorwa!😊
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The last line❤
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Thanks!!
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Omg amazing! Each and every line was so meaningful ❤️❤️✨✨
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Thank you so much, Riya!!
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