
It’s hard to watch
Hard to remember
All that she does to me
All that she did
So well liked
She had so many friends who loved her
Always the best, coming out on top
Skillfull and affable
Smart and confident
Every quality you’d like
I wonder when the success got to her head
And when she turned into what I am
I am jealous of her
I am jealous of my past
I am jealous of what I was
I know this is too vague, cryptic and probably even cringy but I had vot this idea and so had to write on it.
Have a great Sunday and week ahead!!
Any solution to get rid of the jealousy? This doesn’t sound cringe. It’s very much relatable.
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I wish there was one
Thank you:)
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Sweet and short😍
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Thanks
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‘Sunaday’ is a nice day and the twist was like oooo NICE !
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Hehe, thank you!
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Oh and thanks for pointing out the typo. Hv rectified it
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Nice one!!
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Thanks!
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How did I miss many of your posts?? 🤔
Thankfully I noticed. This isn’t vague but beautiful ❤️❤️
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No issues
Thank you, Preeths!!!
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I really liked it!!! Very well put and a reality too… not vague at all .. great work dearie 💕
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Thank you, Hs!! You’re too sweet!🤗💐
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Aah! A twist in the tale! Loved it!!
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Thanks!!
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Hey Akshita! This is true! It ain’t cringy, vague or cryptic definitely. I loved this piece 😄
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Really?
Thank you so much!😃
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Yes!! Of course😄
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🤗♥️
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Amazing lines
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Thank you!
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Always welcome
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Oh my god, how do u write these endings!? The kill me 😭🖤
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Am I saying thanks to a ghost? Or did you resurrect again😛
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Resurrected 😇
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Life is ever changing and your poem says it so well Akshita! Really nicely delivered!
💖🌷🌷🌷
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Thank you auntie!!😊💐💐
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🤗🙂🤗😉
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Reality is Every Now We Transform
Into A Slightly Different Existence
As Human Being And Yeah..
In Eras of My Life Then i’ve
Wondered What Happened
To Those Smiling Eyes and
Joy For All of What Life Offers As Present
With Fears of What Future Brings too…
With Enough Years And Hehe
Decades
We Finally
May Find
The Inner Manual
So We Won’t Have to
Look Back to Older Days for
Better Days WHere Every Now
Becomes A Better Now to Create
in Colors of Life Real… This Much i Know
Feel and Sense for Sure A Best Day oF A Life
May Not Come Until one is Almost 61 Where one
Feels the Most Love The Strongest of All And the Most
Fortunate to Be Alive too… True It’s All About A Better Day Now
To make
It This
Way Truly
Present Now
Akshita the Ups
And Downs That
Stay Yet Rising Higher
in Change We Help Create And Master Now..:)
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Yes, without the rollercoaster ride if life its hard to become stronger.
Thanks for reading and sharing your valuable views!!😊
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Move And Repose
How Many Scholars
Of Soul Express
How
God
Breathes
In All Existence
Dear Akshita
Night Makes Day
Sunset
Sunrise Same
TWiLiGHT Balance
Different
God Sees
Through
All Us Seeds
Living Trees Indeed🙏
Forest God BreatheS EAsE
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Yes we always need a balance.
Your comments are always a delight to read😊
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SMiLes Dear
Akshita This
Is What
Inspiration
Brings Thank You😊🙌
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Hey this is NOT vague, seriously, I’ve wondered this so many times, good to read it 🥲🥲
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Really? Thank you so much, Rishika!🤗💐
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really. <333
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🤗♥️
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I like this one…quite different…with a beautiful flow…
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Thank you!😄
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You’re welcome ✨
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This is so nice and true for many 😊😊😊
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Thank you, Di!
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I love this one! The mystery in it/the power of your words makes it so complete and gives it such an effortless flow! Well done my friend 🖤🤗
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Oh, thanks a lot, Ace!! You made my day!!🤗💐
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Amazing ❤️❤️❤️ vague,but loved it’s charm. Well written!
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Thank you so much!!
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This is nice Akshita ❤
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Really? Thanks!
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Yup…it’s actually nice
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😊😊
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