The night is my biggest enemy
Or perhaps I have made it so to be
It makes me think about things
Which I want to forget, which can’t return swinging
As I lie on the bed
The night’s silence envelops my head
All those memories start seeping in
It makes me overthink
It’s hard to not do so
As my mind takes a mind of its own
I am at war again
Wasting, brawn and brain
A garrison of reasons, plethora of wrongs
Capture me like a pair of tongs
Sometimes the silence seeps in too
It never lasts though I wish it could
It’s just a glimpse, a glimpse of hope
A vision of what it could be before it copes
With reality again it crashes my mind
In the middle of war again I find
Myself, at a war not easily won
A war fought against one’s own
Beautiful!
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Thank you!
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Sadly I am a nocturnal animal…
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Same
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Many words that I didn’t understand but the ones I did were really nice and very well written
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Guess I need to write in a more lucid language.
Thank you!😄
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lovely the way you’ve Expressed it
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Thank you so much!
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“A garrison of reasons, plethora of wrongs
Capture me like a pair of tongs”
This is so so painfully true akshita, love it so much.. hard reality. I don’t know what to say, it’s so real, the feels this poem gives you aaaah amazing! 💓💓💓
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Ohh thank you so much, Rishika!! Yes, I experience this almost every single night and that’s wht I try to read and block these things out
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Night has its own comfort and calm and also it has fear and turmoil. You have bring out that emotion well. Awesome writing.
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Yes, it’s bittersweet
Thank you so much!!
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wonderfully expressed and I think everyone can relate to this Akshita! 💖
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Thank you, auntie!♥️
And yes I guess everyone goes through this
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You’re most welcome.
At some point, I think that’s absolutely true❣️
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wow this is very deep and meaningful ❤❤❤
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Thank you so much, Di!
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Well penned! Sometimes we keep overthinking and at night when the world’s asleep and silence surrounds these thoughts tend to haunt us even more. So well expressed!!
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Indeed
Thank you so much!
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Wow, this is powerful, brilliant and beautifully written! I was hooked from the first line and you describe the ebbs and flows to overthinking so well. Amazing writing, my dear friend! I absolutely love it and always look forward to your posts 🖤🤗
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Thank you!! Yes, I don’t do awards but I am so happy to hear that you think I deserve it♥️
Will check out your post soon:)
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Oh ok, well you deserve it anyway!! 🖤🤗
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🤗🤗🖤
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Aww, thank you so much, Ace!! I am so glad to hear that!
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When All Of life
Becomes A Poetry
Prompt For Dance
And Song
Life
Flows
Out Instead
Of Trapped Within
Secret Of Receiving
Giving For Then There
Is No “TiME” In Think
Only
River
Flows
Ocean
Water
Rain Drop
Wave Whole
Coming Going Free
So How Do We Do This
Mastered By Work And
School Even Church And Home
In Short
We Don’t
Until All of
Life Becomes
A Poetry Prompt
To Create Truly Wings
Free
Escaping
Flying
Over
“The Cuckoo’s
Nest” Next Wide
Awake Creating
Dream
Fruition
Akshita
NiGHT BeCoMES Day
TWiLiGHT SMiLES Ever Now 🌅
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So true
Thank you!
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Pleasure
Dear Akshita
With SMiLes😊🙌
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Beautifully written ❤️
Generally, all the thoughts pour in at night time and we tend to overthink.
” A garrison of reasons, plethora of wrongs
Capture me like a pair of tongs ”
Loved these lines ❤️❤️
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Indeed.
Thank you so much!
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My pleasure reading! ❤️
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Brilliant as always ❤️
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Thank you!+
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You have expressed beautifully, Akshita. 🙂
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Thank you!
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You are welcome. 🙂
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What are those things tht haunt you?
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Umm its like becuz I overthink I can make any and everything haunt me
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Fantastic, Mind blowing, superb, historic ❤👌🏻👍🏻
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Thank you
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Every single night 😭
Well written 👏
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Hi5! Thanks
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Wow, very well penned dear Akshita.❣️❣️ It’s true that few things comes as a loop in our memories, it keeps coming no matter how bad you try to forget. A brilliant poem dear. 👏👏
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Thank you so much, Preeths!!
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Very nice my friend. It is easy to start thinking about unhappy things at night. We try and read something we both really enjoy and even do some mindfulness before reading if we are really worked up or just not sleepy. Great poem. Hugs to you my friend. I hope you have been well. Love ❤️ Joni
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True that
Thank you so much!!
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My pleasure friend. 🥰🤗❤️
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So true… All one needs in such times is that glimmer of hope. Well penned Akshita!
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Yes
Thank you!
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This is so captivating Akshita. Once you start reading, you get trapped in the flow!
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Thank you so much!
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