Last night I viewed a strange view
That people had given up on war
There were no more gun shots heard
On streets there was no gore
There was no more discrimination
Everyone lived in harmony
They did not kill in the name of love
Nor in the name of money
Lush green forests were together in existence
With the tall skyscrapers
No more people protesting on streets
With bold slogans on papers
Animals weren’t hunted anymore
For the sake of joy or hobby
They loved us, stayed with us and laughed along
Teased us by being snobby
It shattered like all god things do
And all I had was a memory’s gleam
For once it wasn’t good to realise
That I had dreamt a dream
This was beautiful writing, you truly have skill with the pen. I think almost everyone’s had this dream before – we all hope and wish for better days. This reminded me of the song ‘Imagine’ by John Lennon. Have you heard it before? He also wishes for a better world like this one in the song.
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Aww, thank you so much 😊
Yes, I have heard it and it’s one of my most favourite songs💐
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Dreaming dreams of greatness
Loved reading this poem
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Thank you!
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Ahh this poem is soo incredibly spot on and timed correctly, taking into account all that is happening around the world. I mean people are dying because of a virus but they are more worried about ethnic cleansing and territories. 😞😒 It’s just so sad. Your dream truly feels like a dream. Nonetheless, I hope it’s one of the rare ones that miraculously come true no matter how impossible it seems. Lovely poem ✨❤️
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I know right!! And how can people be so inconsiderate when all they need to show is kindness? How can one hoard and do black marketing of oxygen cylinders?☹
Yes, all we can do is hope🤞
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Wow, hope the dream comes true!!
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Yes🤞🤞
Thanks!!
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That would be a very beautiful world indeed. Loved this one ♥
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Thank you so much !
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You’re welcome! ♥♥
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Akshita, the ending gave me chills. So stunning, love this piece from the bottom of my heart ❤️🩹
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Thank you so much, Rishika!💜
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Lovely poem Akshita. Loved your dreamy poem, wish it could be true . I guess it’ll take years.
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True
Thank you so much!
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My pleasure dear 😊
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I dream the same dream… Hopefully one day it’ll come true. ❤️
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You may say we are dreamers but we are not the only ones 😉
Thank you so much!
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Hehe… 🤗🤗
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Wish it could be real ☺️
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Same🤞
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This is the dream that needs to be a reality. Very well written!
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Indeed🤞
Thank you so much!!
How are you doing?
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This is so relatable!!!!
Awesome poem!
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Thank you so much!
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Hope and reality! I hope both of these could be used in the same sentence one day! Wonderful poem Aksh!
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Ahh man, we all want that🤞🤞
Thank you Panna!!
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Ah, what a dream! I hope someday it will be a reality. Lovely lines! 🧡
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Yeah 🤞🤞
Thank you so much!
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You wrote the dream of my heart Akshita❣️
Thank you for sharing this gem!❣️❣️❣️
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It’s the dream of all our hearts, I guess
Oh thank you so much,auntie, for reading this!🤗💓
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Yes it sure is. It was my pleasure dearie❣️❤️💖
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Hope the world works to make this dream a reality. 🥺❤️
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Yes🤞🤞
Thank you for reading!😃
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I only wish if this dream can be true in reality!! Very well penned dear Akshita. And the unique thought to create this piece is appreciated. 👏👏👏 Let’s hope that this dream may come true.
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Yes, all we can do is hope and change ourselves
Thank you so much,Preeths!! So glad to hear that 😊💓
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Wowww!! Its was a wonderful dream dear friend. Keep dreaming. You are a sweetheart! You are awesome! I loved it very much. And creativity also. Hugs😊💖🤗🤗
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Aww, thank you so much, Fil! This comment made my day 🤗✨
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Most welcome my friend! It’s my pleasure. It’s so awesome to hear from you.☺🤗
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Same for me too!✨💓
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😍🤗🤗
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True God Things
Fall Apart Yet
Love
Breathes
And Puts
God Back
Together Again Akshita
With SMiles Still Touching
God’s
Faces For Real😊
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True. All we need is love and kindness
Thanks for reading and sharing your valuable views!!✨
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Always
A Pleasure
Dear Akshita
With
SMiles😊
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This reminded me of paradise!
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Thank you!
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A beautiful dream….expressed beautifully….
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Thank you so much 😄
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You’re welcome
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May that beautiful dream come true. Would love to live in such a world Akshita 💖
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We all would ma’am.
Thank you for reading!
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Amazing one. If only that dream could come true!!
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Thanks!
We wish!✨
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That would a glorious dream come true, if it were to be the reality. I love how you have described such harmony and peace. Beautifully written, Akshita ❤️
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I know right !!
Thank you so much, Di!✨
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You’re always welcome, my dear ❤️🤗
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How wonderful it’d be to experience such harmony in reality!
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It’d be utopia!
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Exactly!!
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And still we must not forget, dreams can become true! One just needs the passion! Great work, Akshita!
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Yes, true!
Thank you Arnav!
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What a beautiful dream Akshita. I shall dream it with you and lament that it is not reality 💜
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Thank you, Bree!
“You may say I am a dreamer,
But I am not the only one” 🙌
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What a lucky dream
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And that’s all it is, unfortunately
Btw, how are you? Haven’t seen you posting anything in a while
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I’m good 😊
i took a break last month but i’ve been posting regularly nowadays… you haven’t been getting updates?
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I saw one yesterday but not anything before or after that
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Oh ok, that’s alright then
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Wow so creative and filled with deep truths, my friend! I absolutely love the ending, keep dreaming this reality 🙌🏻🖤. Much love, your writing is always amazing and I look forward to your posts 🖤🖤
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Thank you so much, Ace!! Really appreciate your support as well
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Yss.. let’s hope for peace and harmony:)
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Hope is all we can do besides changing ourselves:)
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Hopefully one day a reality but that’s a long lost dream!
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True that!
Thanks for reading !
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