Away From Eyes

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Away from eyes, I’ll do my happy dance

Away from eyes, I’ll take a risky chance

Away from eyes, I’ll sing my heart out

Away from eyes, I’ll click a photo with a pout

Away from eyes, I’ll write a love story

Away from eyes, I’ll rise to an imaginative glory

Away from eyes, I’ll wear jeans

Away from eyes, I’ll hit the mean

Away from eyes, I’ll take a walk barefoot

Away from eyes, I’ll illogically hoot

Away from eyes, I’ll cry if I want to

Away from eyes, I’ll laugh too

Away from eyes, I’ll be careless

Away from eyes, I’ll be fearless

But note it, it has to be away from eyes

As the eyes judge too much


What do you all think the eyes are here?πŸ‘β€πŸ—¨ Eager to hear all your interpretations !!

This poem was inspired by my fellow blogger @ frameofsoul’s poem, check it out here

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    1. Thanks!!
      And omg sorry, i forgot to add the line about credits to you, because it got inspired from that poem of yours called When No One is Watching..i’ll add it right away

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  1. SMiLes Dear Akshita
    Shores of Culture Expanding
    Receding And Or Eroding Depending

    NoW On What Binding And Bonding

    Symbols And Ideologies Continue

    To GRoW iN LiGHT

    Or Wither

    Away

    In Ocean

    Shallows More

    Away From Greater
    Depths of Souls With
    Still New Dances And Songs Doing Free…

    SMiLes Akshita CULTuRES Do Master

    Others Through Judging EYes to Dominate,
    Control, And Subjugate; Thing is when

    One Becomes Financially Independent
    No Longer Working As Someone Else’s

    Slave Standing More

    Independently

    to Move,

    Dance,

    And Co-Creating Singing
    What Seems Freer To Them…
    Chains May Come Off And Then

    IT Really Doesn’t Matter How Folks
    Attempt to Shame Us As They No Longer
    Control Carrots and Sticks of Our Survival…

    At Least That’s A Way it Still Is to Gain Freedom TRuE iN LiGHT Of
    The United States Other Countries Nearly Impossible of Course Still Lost….

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  2. This is just AMAZING, me dear friend! The repetition, the rhyming and the authenticity is simply divine. Spectacularly done, you are such an incredible writer πŸ–€πŸ€—

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  3. Finally you posted! πŸ˜€ long time!! Also whoa, what a poem! I could relate a good amount, but I would also say that sometimes, we shouldn’t care about the eyes πŸ‘€, we’ve got one life and we should try to live it as much as possible! Awesome poem, AK17 πŸ˜ƒ

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