I have written a thousand poems
For people around me
All but one
Have never written a poem for
Myself
It’s not because I don’t want to
But because I really don’t know how to
Or perhaps because I never thought to
But now I am trying
And yet I don’t know how to fill that page up
I think I know myself well enough
But all that comes to me
Are mere lines and not
Beautiful expressions and metaphors
That I used for others
Yet, I’ll still tattoo that page with ink
As I have written poems
For everyone I love
And I don’t want to be excluded
From that list
nice empathetic poem. how do you get so many comments and followers. any genuine tips for a newbie?
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Thank you!
You can visit and comment on other sites. Follow them if you like their content.
Many times, they ‘ll get back to ur site and follow you back if they like it:D
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cheers
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Beautiful… I like how it conveys conflict inside an empath..who can understand and feel everyone around but not themselves
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Thank you!
That’s exactly what I tried to express!!
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https://rihahwrites.wordpress.com/2021/10/27/unfelt/
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Brilliant 🙂 hits home
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Thanks!!
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This is so moving.
I think I know myself well enough
But all that comes to me
Are mere lines and not
Beautiful expressions and metaphors
I love the way you express yourself. It was so clear. This is excellent writing. Keep it up.
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Thank you so much!! 😊
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This is so awesome! Imaginative and meaningful lines! ❤❤
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Thank you so much!!
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Ahhh this is so beautifully penned! 😍❤❤
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Thank you!
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Reblogged this on Duo Disseminators.
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This is a very well expressed thought( how about we poets write about anything but ourselves? And why is that? Just try to write about you. It may end up messy😂😅)
This is a really cool poem.
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Truee that!
Thank you so much!!
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This poem is so well written and its true we tend to see the best in others but ignore our own good qualities
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Indeed. Thank you!!
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Well written…loved it
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Thank you!
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“But all that comes to me
Are mere lines and not
Beautiful expressions and metaphors
That I used for others”
Akshita dear do you realize how perfectly beautiful these lines are? more beautiful than fancy metaphors, ya know. this poem feels so real. i love it.
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Aw, thank you so much rishika!!😊❤
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writing poems for ourselves is soo much important you know, i will try that out sometime 😋
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Indeed! Great, post it soon
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A poem for everyone you love, and you don’t wanna exclude yourself from the list, hits so hard. Loved the poem Aksh!!
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Thank youuuu Panna!!❤
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‘I’ll still tattoo that page with ink’
beautiful!
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Thank you Kim!!😊
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aw that’s lovely ((:
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Thanks Ray!!
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I love this Akshita and happy to see you writing a oem for you that you so deserve and I’ll fill in the blacks if you get stuck. 💖💖💖 because you are love! 💖
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Aw, thank you so much auntie!!❤
this made my day!
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You’re so welcome and so glad to hear!! 💕
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I don’t think it is about length. Sometimes even two lines are enough and sometimes you run out of pages when you write something.
Writing about ourselves is both easy and difficult. It is easy as we know what is happening in our lives. It is difficult as it feels hard to decide what to write and what to leave. Editing our lives makes it difficult to write about ourselves.
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That’s so accurate. Its hard to elaborate and hard to edit
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Ah! So so so beautiful! That ending – wow!!!
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Thank you!!😊
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Ahaan, that’s nice!!❤️
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Thank you!😄
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Haha nice one 😍
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Thank you!!😊
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This is awesome! I love it!! 🤩💗 Great pic too. 👌💃🏼
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Thank you!!
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Anytime.
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SMiLes Some Folks Learn to Write Poetry
In Hopes of Writing A Book And Selling It
Others Sell All the Material Things
They Have
And Let
Poetry
Write A
Dance And
Song of Their
Soul Free Yet
Of Course We LiVE iN
A World of Buy And Sell
Yet Of Course ALong the
Way of Buying And Selling
We Lose Our SPiRiTS HeARTS
Of SoULS Perhaps Our Soul
Will Rebel And Bring Back
A SPiRiT oF HeART
Whole
Complete
Naked Enough
As Is to Green Our
Year ‘Round Springs Alive
SMiLes Akshita Do Escape
Buy And Sell With SMiLes..
How Would one Start Perhaps
By Making Each Word A Song
And Step A Dance Yet That’s
only my Soul Room With A View Now..:)
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That’s so true sir!!
We make our own world brighter😊
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SMile Dear Akshita
Flicker Flame Torch
Bonfire Greater
Yes Reach
Your Highest
Light Shining All😊🙌
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😄😄
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😊
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Love yourself to get loved. Try again, and you’ll get better results this time.😊
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True that
Thanks for reading😊
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So deeply beautiful and such an amazing message of self love! Incredibly well done, my dear friend 🖤🤗
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Thank you so much Ace!!❤
This brought a smile to my face
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Wow AK17. I liked the plot of this poem. Nice!!
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Thank you Sep!!
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This was so beautiful!! ❤
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Thank you!!😊
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Oh those last few lines… I felt that 💜
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Thank you so much!! Glad to hear that ❤
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How lovely! ❣️❣️ I feel this poem dear. Thanks for sharing
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Thank you Preeths!!
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Beautifully written and yes, you absolutely deserve it. I loved this, Aksh ❤️😃
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Thank you so much di!😊❤
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You are welcome ❤🤗😊
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Aww, such a sweet poem! It has such a deep meaning! Yes, you should always be on the list!
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Thank you so much Betty!!
Indeed❤
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Aw, the ending was so nice!!
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Thank you apple!❤
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Now I’m just apple 😂😂😂
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I’ll keep switching😂
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I also need another one you because AK17 is boring 😫
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Andar ki creativity ko jagao
Dimag lagao😇
😂😂
(Btw, I can also call you DKT😛)
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Nah dkt will get boring soon. I like aksh, it’s sweet and stylish …..
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I quite like that!
You can probably give me monthly nicknames so that they don’t get boring😗
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Such a beautiful poem! Self love should come first, always ❤️
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Thank you so much! Indeed❤
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Wow Akshiii!!!! This is so wonderful!!😍❤
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Thank you Isha!!❤🤗
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Most welcome!💕💕
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Yes. Absolutely. No one knows us better than ourselves. And it doesn’t need any metaphors tbh. Loved the thought ❤️
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True that.
Thank you so much!!
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Beauty!!!! Yes !!! You should be the first priority in that list ❤️
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Thank you di!!❤
How are you? Long time no see
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Yes dearie … totally packed days … long time since I saw myself in the mirror too 😂
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😅😂 busy with the new job? Or volunteer work?
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New job and caring for my mother in law. She underwent hysterectomy.. she is ok now .. but needs a bit of help at times 😊
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Ohoh, good to hear she is okay now
Hope you get more time to yourself in a few days❤
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This is so nice🥺
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Thank you!!
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This is so good!!!
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Thank you Riddhi!!
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