How nice it would be to have,
A room inside our minds
Where I could stash my thoughts, my memories
That I don’t want to rewind
The swirl of consecutive broken melodies
That my brain somehow relives
Stay with me, out of control
A refused gift they give
If I had that room, I would have a place
To bury those vicious things
A pause button to all terrible films
No more helplessness they will bring
Over time, it’ll be labelled the forbidden room
Where things just go inside
And stay there for the rest
Of eternity
The image then shatters
For I don’t , can’t have it
All I can do is run away from myself, for myself
And that too is impossible, isn’t it?
“If you hear a song that makes you cry and you don’t want to cry anymore, you don’t listen to that song anymore. But you can’t get away from yourself. You can’t decide not to see yourself anymore.”
This poem got inspired from the above line from a book really close to my heart. Can you all guess it? And after people have guessed it correctly and you know the name, read it!! ’cause its so heartfelt and amazing
So beautiful ❤️
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Thank you!!
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love your poem and I’m stashing my mind in yours.. lol.. nice job!💖
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Aww, thank you so much auntiee!!
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You’re sooo welcome my sweet!💖
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This is brilliant.
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Thank you!
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Beautiful poem .
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Thank you!!
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Outstanding , fabulous ❤😘😘
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Thaanks!
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This is lovely. ❤️❤️Joni
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Thank you ma’am!😊💓
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You are so very welcome and hope you have a truly blessed weekend. Love and hugs to you and your loved ones. 🤗❤️🦋
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Such a beautiful poem Akshi❤ That excerpt is heartfelt. Will try to read the book soon❤
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Thank youuu Isha!!!🖤🖤 Please do, am sure you’ll love it!
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Oh, this is a beautiful poem Aksh! It’s 13 Reasons Why? I read Sep’s comment lol. Is the book good?
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Thank you!!
Yes and YES! The book is awesome!
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The quote is so sad and powerful! And your poem is beautifully written. Really liked it ❤
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Thank you so much!!
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Oh it is thirteen reasons why? Or is it umm maybe the book ‘ The Fault in our stars’??
??
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Yes 13 Reasons Why!
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Amazing poem❤️❤️
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I loved the quote
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Glad you like it:)
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Thank you!!
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The swirl of consecutive broken melodies- This line is pure art
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Thank you so much!
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I love it. ❤
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Thank you!😊
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I really wish if we all had one!!! Beautifully penned dear Akshita. 👏👏❤️❤️
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Same!
Thank you so much ❤
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Loved it as always ❤️
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Thank you so much!🤗❤
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“If you hear a song that makes you cry and you don’t
want to cry anymore, you don’t listen to that song anymore.
But you can’t get away from yourself. You can’t decide not to see
yourself anymore. You can’t decide to turn off the noise in your head.”
From the Book “Thirteen Reasons” All Of What May
Contribute to a Life No Longer Worth Living…
Hard to Hear And Parts Some Would Like
To Sweep Away And Disappear Yet Never
the Less When We Try to Hide Reality
Reality Doesn’t Go Away Particularly
In Ways Now We Feel and Sense
Our Human Environment Around
Us as the Social Animals
We aRe Who Intuit
Acceptance
As A Life
Or Death
Proposition as
Evolutionary Speaking
Before Technology to Assist
Getting Separated From the
Village Meant Almost Sure Death…
True Though Now We Have So Many Tools
If We Use Them that may Bring Respite to
Psychological Trauma IF We Use Them
And True One Great Source of Therapy
Is the Talk Therapy of Joining Words
With Deep Emotions Letting them
Out And Sure Sharing them
With the Entire Globe
For Support
Now For With
A Big Enough NET
There Will Be Fish Who
Swim in Similar Schools of
Life’s Experiences DarK Thru LiGHT…
When We Go Silent And No Longer Reach
Out is when The Demise of Our Ability to connect
With Others May Falter More Learning How Important
Our Feeling And Sensing Minds Are And Nourishing Ourselves
Moving Connecting Co-Creating With Others is Simply Nourishing
Our Humanity
Becoming
Whole More
Complete Now
And Enough And Best
Of all to Be Best FRiEnDS
And Soulmate With the One Within
Us Our Self Most to Become More Of
An Overflowing Fountain to Give and Share With Others…
SMiLes Akshita A Best Psychotherapist Is Getting to Know Our
Self Getting to Feel and Sense All Of Who We aRe Head to
Toe and More And Blogs Are an Excellent Way of Practicing
This as An Art and Free Dance Is Yes also an Excellent way
of Regulating Emotions and Integrating Senses as They Do
Flow From Head to Toe.. Master Moves Master Emotions and
Senses
Balancing
All And Yes
Indeed Master
Mind as Science
Shows Emotions
And Feelings and
Senses Precede Most All So-Called
Rational Decisions in Life and Best
Of All With Enough Bio-Feedback in
Autotelic Ways in Flow We May Develop An
Ability To Be Happy As We Wanna Be Self-Generating Positive Feelings
Senses Emotions Truly Mastering All that is Our Human Feeling Sensing
KNoWinG ReaLiTies Best Giving Sharing Freely of Course in Spirit of Love
For All
That Exists…
DarK Thru LiGHT..:)
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Truee, beautiful lines
Thank you so much
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Thanks
So Much
For the inspiration
Dear Akshita With SMiles😊
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😊😊
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☺️
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Running away is impossible of course! A very thoughtful poem. 👏🏻
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Strike off ‘very’😬
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Thank you so much!
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Okay, so I cheated. I googled it and it’s 13 REASONS WHY? AK17, I LEGIT STARTED THAT BOOK YESTERDAY. BEAUTIFUL POEM THAT IS, BUT I CAN’T GET OVER THIS COINCEDENCE. AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
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Yesss!!!
Omg, that’s so ahhhh!! Please complete it soon and let me know. I have to talk about this with someone!! Like its so awesome, trust me
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I definitely will!
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Such a beautiful poem and so so relatable – I wish for it too- to stash away some thoughts that would just go away. *sigh*
Beautiful quote too – do tell which book!!
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Thank you so much!
*joins you in sighing*
Its 13 Reasons Why
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That quote just killed me 😧😱😭😭🖐🏻
Also, akshita this poem is so relatable 😞😍. Loved it!!
ALSO WHAT BOOK IS THAT, I NEED IT!!
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Ikr, i had the same reaction when i read it!
Thank you mistress Apple!
Its
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13 Reasons Why
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Oh, THAAAAAAAAT book, I see 🙂
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Yes thaaaaaat book🙂
Please read it now atleast
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I AM INTRIGUED!!!
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I AM SO SOO LIKE REALLY HAPPY TO HEAR THAT!!
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Hehe
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Wow Akshita!! This is such a good poem!! You’re so good at this!! And you’re right, we can’t stop seeing ourselves!! Awesome post!!
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Thank you so much Betty! Indeed❤
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This is so relatable Akshita. But I guess, it’s we who have to build such a room within….no one else can do it for us. Do share the name of the book. Would love to read it!
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That too is true! Thank you so much ma’am!
Its 13 Reasons Why
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Excellent Akshita!
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Thank you!!
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Yes it could be really nice…
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Glad you agree
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🙂
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Beautiful words Akshita! That room would be a good breakthrough for our thoughts
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Exactly! Thank you so much!
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This is OUTSTANDING, my dear friend! Wow! Your writing is always amazing but this piece especially resonates. Incredibly well done 🖤🤗
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Thank you so much Ace!!🤗❤
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Nice one. Wish there were some room like that.
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Beautiful!
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Thanks!
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