My heart is caged in ice
Protected by covering of snow
Secluded, alone but safe
Yet, it wants to break the covering
But, the ice is too strong
I decorate its cage with snowflakes
And dried flower dust
I request it to remain
Hidden from everything outside
Away from the world
It fights me as I talk to people
Willing to break free
I don't want to mess up
I don't want to be taken advantage of
So, I contain it there
Late under moonlight
When its just me, the wind and moon
I feel spring come up, I hear the ice cracking
And nestle my heart in my warmth
Asking it to not be grieved, I forever know its here
I wrote this poem for the December Vibes Poetry Contest being hosted by Khushi and Kunjal@ Duo Disseminators. Check out their blog guys, they are splendid!!
Rules of the contest:
RULES:
- Design a post of your own and link back to the original post to notify the creator. Unnotified posts will not be judged.
- Paste the rules of this contest on your post if you have a blog. If not, contact us at duodisseminators@gmail.com with your entry!
- Tag this post as December- Vibes- Poetry
- Last date of submission is 10 January.
- Word limit ranges to 200 words.
- Inappropriate content shall be disqualified
- You can send no more than 2 entries.
- Nominate at least 5 people to participate in this contest.
- Thee last date for submission is ***
- Its necessary that you all further nominate people for this contest so that it carries on as a tag too! And you have to create illustration/poster/abstract art/image that resonates with your poem.
The poster I made was:
Nominations:
Now, for the hardest part. I nominate everyone with W/I/N/T/E/R in their names! Hope you all will participate:)
I also nominate my 5 newest followers:
Poem inspired by Charles Bukowski
so deep and profound and the title is amazing ✨
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Thank you so much kim!
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The imagery used here is good, as is the way in which you have expressed your thoughts. Beautifully penned 🙂
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Thank you! Glad to hear that!!
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You write well, keep up the good work ❤️
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Thank you! Means a lot 😊✨
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You are most welcome ❤️
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Omg this was so lovely ❄❄ Each line has so much power. I really loved “I decorate its cage with snowflakes
And dried flower dust” you must have put a lot of thought into it and it came out wonderfully!
And even this “I feel spring come up, I hear the ice cracking
And nestle my heart in my warmth” PERFECTION😊
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Thank you so much!
Yes I did. I mean I wanted to decorate the cage with wintery things and that’s what I could come up with
Thanks again!❤
Also, I nominate you:))
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Thank you Akshita! Much appreciated♥
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Wonderful poem, Akshita! 🤩
I was thinking about an icy heart for a few days now, and came across this beautiful piece. I loved it.
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Thank you so much!!
Great minds think alike😁😁
Thanks again!!
Also, I nominate you!❤
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Akshita this is so powerful. Such a skilfully written and emotionally loaded piece 👏👏👏👏💜
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Thank you so much!!
Also, you’re nominated!💙
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Wow this is just beautiful 😍 ❤
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Thank you so much di!
I nominate you as well, hope you’ll post something real soon:D
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Oh my gosh! This is soo beautiful! I can feel the freezing ice icy cold and hear it cracking apart! I can picture a heart sitting next to the fire wrapped in a blanket😂
Your poems are always so amazing!!!❤
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I am so happy you liked it Starr💙(can i call you that?)
Thank you so much!!
And you’re nominated! Hope you participate:)
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Sure hah! You are welcome! Ah yep, thanks a ton, I really appreciate you nominating me!❤❤
(Even tho Im aldready nominated by khushi and kunjal, heheh lol!)
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Then you can write two poems ig😁
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Lol! Yep! I am writing two for fun anyway lol!
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Yay! Can’t wait to read ’em
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Yep!!! Thanks!
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Amazing poem, loved it!!!
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Thank you so much dhriti!!
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This was a wonderful poem!
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Thank you so much!!
I also nominate you, hope you’ll do it:)
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Ah thank you so much, I’ll definitely get to it soon :))
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Welcome 😀
Eager to see what you write!
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this is such a beautiful poem Aksh!
‘Asking it to not be grieved, I forever know its here’
Its sad but so it does so much justice to our topic!
thank you for participating. Loved the entry!
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But you will have to nominate people 😂.!
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Um like explicitly?
I have been nominating people in the comments of they have any one of the letters from the word winter. Does that work?
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yeap. Like at least 5.
That doesn’t work 😉 sadly
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Ooh, okay, sure!
Will do that!!
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I have done that too:))
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Thank you so much!
I am so glad you think so!!
Honestly, thanks for coming with this beautiful concept. I was trying to write something but nothing worthwhile was coming up. The contest gave me this idea! So thankss💙
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yours welcome aksh!
😃
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Beautifully penned dear Akshita. ❤️❤️ I just felt wow when I read this!!! Well penned dear
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Thank you so much!! That means a lot!❤😊
Also, you’re nominated!!
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SMiLes Dear Akshita Oh How
There is Connecting Moving
Co-CreatinG As Long As We
Dance And Sing A New Song
Together
Removing
Ourselves
From Ice And
Concrete Before
Just to Flow Alive
Free Where Hands Touch
ReNeWinG Bird’s Wings, Smiles
Yes, “W I N T E R” Hehe.. Got A
Top “T, I, E, R” Result in ‘Katie Mia Frederick’
Out of the ‘Winter’ Letters Required to Join in
From my Pen Name Related to All my Letters
Yet No, i Don’t Join In on Any of The ‘Reindeer
Games’ in ‘Poetry Prompts’ Online as Invariably
i Will Just Be too Strange/Different For Anyone Who
Orchestrates
Order
Over
Total Freedom
in this Life With SMiLes…
Rather Make All of Life a
Poetry Prompt For Dance
And Song Free And Just Do Every
Event of Life Moving, Connecting,
Inhaling Peace Exhaling Love Freely
Co-Creating this way in Autotelic Flow
With Rarely Any Rules…
HAha Other than
Death and
Paying
Taxes that
Generally Speaking
on the Federal Level
i’ve Avoided Paying for
13 Years Without Even
Breaking Any Rules Hehe…
For It’s True Ya Have to
Know The Rules to Beat
A System With No Wings…
As Today 12.22.21 is the Opening
Date for the Matrix Movie Part 4
Per Title, “Matrix Resurrections”…
i Am surely Not Going to Join Any
‘Matrix Party’ Verily i’ll Just Do ‘Neo’ Allone…
Writing Poetry In Reverse Like the ‘White
Knight’ Feeding the Right Hemisphere of my
Brain as The ‘Dormouse Suggests
Hehe in the ‘Matrix Resurrections’
Movie Trailer Singing it Well
Along With ‘Grace Slick’
And ‘White Rabbit’ too
As Far As What to Do
Removing Ourselves
From Concrete Ice
Souls In
Life
to Flow
As A River
Free Once Again…
With No Banks to Restrict..:)
-Fred or ‘Alice’ or ‘White Knight’
or ‘Dormouse’ Or Even “Neo”, Nope,
~All The Names Really Don’t MatteR aT All…
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I know yours matches. Even though you haven’t done any, i nominate you for this and really hope you write something:)
I am yet to watch the trailer of matrix😅
Thanks for reading though!
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SMiles Dear Akshita
It’s Just An Honor
To Travel The
Globe Through
This Fiber Optic
Cable And
Interact With
So Many Beautiful
Poetic Souls
Particularly
From Indian
Treasures
Of Poetry
my FRiEnD
Thank You 🙏
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This is such a nice poem Akshita!❤
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Thank you so much!!!
You’re nominated:D
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I’ll try my best!❤
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I feel spring come up, I hear the ice cracking
And nestle my heart in my warmth WOW
Amazing poem Akshita
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Oh thank you so much!
And you’re nominated!!
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I am?
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Ahh I have I in me name Okie I shall try to write a poem
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Also a R 😀
Can’t wait to read it!
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This is beautiful and a very hopeful feeling when you read it. It is so nice to see your words. I am sending you my love. ❤️🤗🦋
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Thank you so much for those kimd words❤
I nominate you for this! Hope you do it:))
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Hello dear friend. What are you nominating me for? I was off social media for a trip. Let me know I am sending you more love. ❤️🤗🥰
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This poem I wrote was for a contest. I am nominating you to participate in that. The link is there in the post itself.
Also, hope u enjoyed ths trip ❤
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Oh I see it, thank you dear Akshita. Yes the trip was to see my daughter, grandchildren and my father in law it was wonderful. Thank you sweetie. Sending much love and blessings your way. ❤️🎄🤗🦋
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Anytime!
That sounds wonderful❤ thank you and Merry Christmas !
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❤️🎄🤗🦋
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Beautiful poem!!❄
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Thank you so much!
Also, you’re nominated!!
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