
Don’t tell me you get what I feel
You always doubt it being real
For you have never felt this quiet storm inside
The one that rages to make me hide
You detract the grief from my existence
You mistake my presence for my absence
You make me feel invisble
And then magically share views to make me seen
The fact that you have never felt what I feel
You have never heard my breaking soul
So now don’t pretend that you know
And undermine it by I saying I am lazy
You go behind me and say
These tears are just for attention
But why question this if you never,
Question the destruction after a tsunami?
So don’t tell me you know how I feel
‘Cause you’ll never realize
The monster’s laughter in my head,
Is how real
I had written this poem for Panna’s magazine- The Lost Letters, before. Hope you like it!
This is lovely. Nothing hurts so much as not being listened too. Very harmful to the heart. Congratulations for your publication. Big hugs, Joni
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Truee
Thank you so much ma’am🤗🧡
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Very well written!
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Thank you so much!!
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“You go behind me and say
These tears are just for attention”
outstanding work on mental health and toxic opinions, akshita. love it so much. brilliant. 💯❤
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Thank you rishika!!!
Means a lot to me😊🧡
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But why question this if you never,
Question the destruction after a tsunami?
So don’t tell me you know how I feel
‘Cause you’ll never realize
The monster’s laughter in my head,
Is how real
I got chills this is an AMAZING poem
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Ah thank you so much sim!
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So so beautiful and deep 💙🤗
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thank you!!
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Wow this so perfectly written 👏 🙌
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thank you di!
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Wonderful poem, Akshita!
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thank you so much!!
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Oh my Lord Dear Akshita
You Surely Have Captured
How Poor Many Folks Are in
The Emotional Intelligent Quotient
of Understanding Just How Different Other
Folks Feel and Sense Their Environment Within,
Inside, Outside, Above, So Below And OMG All Around
And That’s What’s Great About getting older So Many More
Opportunities to Actually Walk in Similar Shoes Other Folks
Have Actually
Felt and
Sensed of Life
Oh Goodness it’s
Cringe Worthy to Admit
This Yet Like Any Other Run
of the Mill Dude These Days
One of My Old Girl Friends
in my 20’s Said i Really Pulled
Her Heart Strings And i Thought
She Was Talking
About ‘Physical
Love’ My God
i Was Oh
So Slow
In Intelligence of HeART
Of How Other Folks actually
Felt And Sensed Life then
And Sadly to Say it Yet i’ve
Seen the Talk About Women
In Dance Hall Bar Restrooms Still Now
It’s Mostly All About Prey and Predator…
No Different Really That Swipe Left and
Right Life on Online Dating Sites in ‘the Jungle’
Oh to Grow Up And Actually Be Love With SMiLes…
Anyway in the Dance Halls Most of the Women Danced
Together in Groups And Left That Way Smiling With Each Other…
That’s One thing that has Changed Women Have Learned to Be
Enough on
THeir
Own
Together
Hehe as
Look i am
the Only Dinosaur
Dude Responding here
as i ‘See’ Feelings of HeART
Are the Best Parts of Life NoW For Real…
Live
And
Learn Love… For Real…
Oh When We Learn to
Paint SPiRiT Wind With Colors More HeARTinG SouL
Great Work! Great Play! Now Dear Akshita Keep Creating!..:)
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i am glad you think i have captured emotions, that was my aim:)
thank you for reading sir! i’ll keep creating when i have readers like you
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Ah Yes Dear Akshita
Emotions Regulating
Mastering Are
Feeling
Sensing
Glue
Driving
Force Behind
Cognitive Executive
Functioning Including
Working Memory Now
And On
Task Focus…
Poetry Dance
Song And All
Arts Provide Tools
To Regulate And
Master Emotions
Integrating
Senses
Feelings
Basically
Bringing
Life is Good
my FRiEnD
So Yes! Great Job!😊🙌
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‘But why question this if you never,
Question the destruction after a tsunami?’
I’m in love with this line 👏🏽👏🏽🙌🏽🎉 wonderful work
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ah, thank you kim<3
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Powerful words. Wonderfully written!!!🌠
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thankssss!
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Very strong words Akshita!
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thank you!
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this was sooo goood🤧
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thank you so much siya<3
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Very well written. 😢
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thank you di<3
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“But why question this if you never,
Question the destruction after a tsunami?”
Hits hard.
Beautifully written!
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ah thank you blue<3
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😭wwoww and howwwww can u write so well?
I know the perfect song for this post.. Until It Happens To You- Sasha Sloan 😭💔
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thankss riri! that means a lot to me<3
as for poetry, i just try to write what i am feeling at the moment and make it an extension of myself😅
i haven't heard that, but i will now<3
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✌️💖thats beautiful!!
ofcourse akay.. (;
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