Hey everyone!
Right, just remembered I am weird when it comes to intros so lets get along with this-
Rules-
- Tag Eva @album of amazing.
- Mention the person who tags you. I was tagged by Stara @ The Pool of Thoughts. Check out her blog everyone, she is amazing!! And I was also tagged by Dhriti @ The Tomboy Diaries. She too is an awesome blogger! Do check them out, you will not be dissapointed😁
- Add the rules to your post.
- Pick 2 topics to write 2 Haikus.
- Tag alteast 5 people.
- HAVE FUN!❤❤
Topics-
- Dogs.
- Fire.
- Sea.
- Nature.
- Music.
The topics I have chosen are Sea and Music. I have tried writing them in a way different than the usual 5/7/5 meter.
Sea
Deep beneath the blue tranquillity
A mother protects her children
From the floating, choking mess
Music
While travelling through blank spaces
The notes wrap me in a cardigan
Helping me remember my wildest dreams
I nominate:
Everyone who wants to do this!! Spread this and lets wallow in haikus<3
I would love to hear your interpretations of these small pieces! Lets talk in the comments!
love your Haikus Akshita! 💖👏👏👏
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Thank you auntie!!
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Vast,monochromatic sea,
Whose glossy waters sparkle,
While darkness reigns beneath.
Warbling river races
Through parched,drought afflicted deserts,
Quenching its thirst.
(this is one of my views on music)
You know,responding to haikus is kinda interesting,when one’s responses are haikus themselves!
Thanks for the little challenge! Your haikus were really good. 🙂
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Those were so well written!!
Thanks to you for taking it as one! Thank youuu!
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The first one was heart touching and the second one was pretty clever huhh😉😍
Also akshi, there is high school magazine I work for. It is looking for more writers/artists/photographers. Would you be interested in joining? And don’t worry, it’s not a lot of work or anything. Let me know if you are interested and then we can continue on mail or WhatsApp, whatever you are comfortable with❤❤
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Thank you so much isha!😊
That sounds great! But actually I am not really comfortable sharing my mail id or ohone number online, so if there’s anyway I could communicate through you in WP, I’d be happy to contribute 😄
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You can mail me personally at guptaishita15@gmail.com
If you have any problem with that you can ask your questions here and I’ll be more than happy to answer them 🙂
P.S. If you want to be a part of the team, you will need to share your mail and number with the team, personally of course. Because we have a group and all, and all the submissions are through mail.
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Ohh
Even though it sounds lovely I don’t think I’ll be able to join as I’m not really allowed to share my mail id. Sorry to decline😕
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No problem Akshi♥️
If you ever change your mind, just let me know. But no pressure 😊
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Thanks for understanding!
I will, i will❤✨
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Of course!🤗❤
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hey akshita!!! i LOVE both the haikus girl, especially the second one ;))
and the first one is amazing tooo, you wrote about the environment and i honestly respect that so much❤❤
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Thank youuuuu!!
#swifties❤✨
Thanks again:))
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🥰🥰❤
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Thanks for doing my blog Akshita! WOW! those poems were amazing
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Oh gosh typo… tag… not blog
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Thank you eva!!
And thanks to you for creating such an amazing tag!
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the person who comments on your blog with a poem of his! Shout out first!
Secondly great haikus!!
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Apologies from my stupid brain, but i didn’t really get the first part of the comment 😅
Thank youuuuu!!!😁
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oh there was a person who writes long poem in the comment!
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Got it now! You’re giving him a shout-out? Yep, i’ll add to it!!!!
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yepp!
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Both of them are AMAZING but I may be a little biased towards the music one
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Thank you!!
Well ofc, swifties🧡
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whoa 😍💙 i love both of these! especially the sea one!
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thank youuu maggie<3
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np!
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Amazing writing. Loved the music one.
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thank you so much!
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SMiLes Dear Akshita
True Ocean Of Love
Seems to Be Polluted
By Human Clothes and
Other Tools These Days
As Humans Forget They
Are Water Ocean Wave Whole
to Spread
Love More
Than Fall
To the Bottom
Now With All The
Anchors Humans Become
Yes The Clothes All the Tools
Separating Us
From Ocean
Whole Water Wave One Love
And True It is Not the Parts of the
Song the Notes That Make the Music
It is the Synergy of the Silence Between
The Notes That Builds The Melody And Harmony
In Ways Never
Told By
Single
Notes or
Waves In the Ocean
That Have Forgotten
They Are Made Out of
the Same Water Of Love
Hehe Somedays i Do
Shorter Poetry Breath Than
Haikus Other Days i Swim
in Words As Blue Whales
Love Just
Deeper mY FRiEnD…
Thank You The Way i See
it For Now This Breath Wouldn’t
Exist Without Your Two Haikus Now
As True i See All oF it As One Ocean
mY FRiEnD…
Yes
Water
Waves
Leaving
Always Ocean
Returning Now For Real..:)
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Sea one especially short yet deep
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thanksss!
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Amazing 😊
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vfdrsakBJGMtdla this was so fun I am laughing. ZD.
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thankssss sep!
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The sea is amazing and music it is inspired by Taylor Swift or not?
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thanks!
and yes its miss swift’s song puns:D
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That sea one – beautifully put and so true!!!! ❤️
Is the music one inspired by Taylor Swift?
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thank youuuu!
yes!!
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aaah both of these are so beautiful, AND THE SECOND ONE –
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Thank you so much!
YAS, swifties unite!
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Haha, the music one was really clever!
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thank you moi!<3
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Both so good Akshita. The sea one is profound
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thank you ma’am!!
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Wow! The T.Swift reference here is just awesome. How creative! Wonderful!!!👏🏻
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thank you so much jahnavi!
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I loved both. Second one reminds me of Taylor Swift
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thank youuu!
yep, its filled with her song puns
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Amazing haikus !!
Oh how I love the Taylor Swift references 🥰💛
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thank youuuu!
swifties unite<3
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I love the sea one ! Nice haikus
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thank you so much di!
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Amazing Akshita! Thanku so much for doing the tag! I loved the sea one!
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my pleasure starr!
thank you!
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You r welcomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!
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Was the second one with TS references?🙂
Awesome!🤜🤛💖
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yessssss:))
thank you riri!
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:p
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