
The night sky is dark and deep
Its tiny hearts glow as the world sleeps
“Those are fairy dust”, the little girl said
“Lets collect them”, said Bill
“They are right there, on the hill”
Just after dinner, the climbed up the mound
And leapt for the moon, off the ground
Their fingers touched just thin air
So they climbed a tree, to catch it from there
As they climbed, the stars ran away
“We are tiny” cried his sister, “we can’t reach the sky”
“Lets send our flying toys then”, came the reply
They sent kites and balloons to chase the hearts
And model planes and lots of darts
The kites and planes, tangled up in the trees
The darts and balloons were swept by the breeze
The two small kids cried in dismay
Nothing could chase the stars, far away
“Lets build our own stars, that’s what we’ll do!”
Beaming smiles carried cardboard and glue
They built a night sky, glowing and dark
The stars like small tiny shining marks
Lying upon it, they dreamt through the night
Of flying under the star light
This is something I wrote whilst writing something else and this one turned out to be better. I think its the first time I have written a poem with a storyline where everything is symbolic. Would love to see what you interpret! Lets talk in the comments.
Also yes, I am back! I apologise for not reading your posts but I am gonna try my best to catch up with my reader.
This is a lovely childlike piece. Beautiful, like a story for adult children. Beautiful. š¤ā¤ļø
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Thank you!!šāØ
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Beautiful š
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Thank you so much šš§”
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Brilliantly penned ā£ļø
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Thank you āØ
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You are most welcome ā¤ļø
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What a wonderful little story š„°
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Thank you!
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No problem š¤
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Oh this is so beautiful.
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Thank you š
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WHOAAA this was beautiful and had gorgeous imagery! ššš
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Ah thank you so much maggie!š§”š¤
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youāre welcome! šš
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I loved this one. You have created such a beautiful imagery in my mind.
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Thank you so much!
That make me really glad:)
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Love this poem Akshita!!!!!
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Thank you bree!!
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Ok this is so beautiful I legit went awww when they were chasing the stars but then decided build their own
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Aw thank you so much š§”š¤
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Beautiful poem and fairy dust needed at this time our world.
Glad to see you.. been wondering how you were doing….. missed you!!!š
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Thank youuuu!!š§”
I have been good, what about you? Missed you too<3
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AHHH THIS WAS SO BEAUTIFUL AND MAGICAL, AKSHITA, LOVED IT SO MUCH!!!
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Thank youuuuu anoushka!!!š§”
PS: can you send me your blog link? I can’t find it:(
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Sorry, I just saw this š š
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Nvm, found it!!
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This was really beautiful Akshi! Definitely different from what you usually write, and I loved itā¤
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Thank you so much isha!š¤š§”
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So adorable dude !!! Its so mellow and pure. Writing is full of surprises isn’t it? In the end what you wrote turned out lovely šš
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Thank youuuuuš¤
Yes, yess
Thanks againš§”
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This is beautiful Akshita! You were dearly missed!ā¤
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Thank you!š§”āØ
I missed you all too!!
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How have you been? Exams done?
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I am good
Yess
How are you?
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I am doing good too….on leave now?
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Awww….this is too cute. ā£ļøā£ļø I love how it flows so beautifully. Appreciate your creativity dear. š Glad to see you back. Hope all is well
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Thank you so much preeths!!
Yes I am good. How are you?
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Bro this hit hard it’s beautiful and playful and memorable at the same time. This is def a new favourite, I loved the storyline, and sometimes its those sidepiece poems that turn out the best šššššāš«šØāØššššš
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Thank you so much kim!!šāØ
Ah true true
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Ooh I think this is about how they wanted to grab the stars that were already there, but since they couldn’t they didn’t give up and worked hard to create their own stars or their own paradise and stuff and fulfilled their dreams.
What did u intend it it be?
This was awesome btw !!! And like the rhymesdd tooooo
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You’re really closee mistress!
I wrote it to be:
The stars were oppurtunities and the various methods they tried were our efforts and the obstacles was..life. So basically what I wanted to portray is that sometimes you gotta make your own oppurtunities..
Thank you so much!!!!
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Yesss trueee
This one time I made up this quote- opportunity is not a guest that it will knock on your door. You have to BE the one to knock on opportunity’s door…lollllll
Pleasureee!
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Indeed! That is apt
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This is amazing aksh!
Glad to see you back
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Thank you!!
Its good to be back! I missed you allš§”
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I like this a lot
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Thank you! I am glad you do
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Stars Seen to Never End in Skies Above
So Below Within Inside Outside All Around
Stars of Creativity Burn Bright iMaGiNaTioN
Flames
Free
RiSinG
Stars of
Creativity
Burning Bright
Within Nice to See
You Shining Again Dear Akshita
In Creativity of SMiLes So Very Free..:)
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Yess, agreed
Thank you so much for reading and sharing your viewsāØ
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SMiles Thank You
For Returning to
Creativity as
It Truly
Inspires
The Gift
Of More Creativity
With A Potential
To Spread
With No
End Now
Never
Doubt
Your
Reach
Dear Akshita
With Lasting SMiles
A Real
Cheshire
Catās Left-Overs š š
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