
Just a nerdy girl, with a sporty one
Catching comets and storing them in a stack of memories
Their minds synergised and melodies resonated
Walking along the path of growing up
Scared to lose, Scared to gain
Not ready yet to accept the change
Promising to always co-ordinate their feet
Even if they lead to different destinations
A promise upon a comet, enough to keep them going
And even if they have to turn around
Those shooting stars caught would last a lifetime
This is something I wrote for an irl friend and I kinda liked what I had written after a long time. So, here you have it
Have a nice day!
what a wonderful poem with such a happy tune Akshita! 💖💖🌻🙏👏👏👏
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Thank you! I am glad you think so😊✨
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It was awesome!💖🌻
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🤗🧡
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Superb poem akshita
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Thank you!
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As always, you’ve written something amazing🌻
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Thank you sab!🧡
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Always a pleasure💖
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SMiLes Dear Akshita Life Is A Cake
Our SPiRiTS of Emotions And Senses
Bakes Moving Connecting
HeARTS SoULS
Co-Creating
ToGeTHeR
And
Solo too
Yes Freely
Poems Will
Hold Depths
Of Memories
A Slice of That
And This Cake
Forevernownew…
Hehe Most of my FRiEnDS
Are Nerds And Shy Now Even
Ones Who Pretend Not to be hAha…
A Flip of
A Dime
i Move
Connect
Co-Create Both Ways
ToGeTHeR Or Allone..:)
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True that sir
Thanks for reading!
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Pleasure😊🙌
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This is sooo good!
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Thanks dhriti!!
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There’s a cool flow to this Akshita. The use of comets, friendships and promises is very clever 😀👏
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Thank you so much bree! I am so glad you thought so✨
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This definitely reminds me of my friend and I. This is super cute and lovely! 😍
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Thank you so much 😊🧡
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You’re welcome! 😄
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This is so cute!!! Sending the post to a friend. ❤️
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Thank you!
I am so happy to hear that🧡
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Aaaaah this is so gooooddd 😌😌😌
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Thank you mistress apple♡
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Nice poem 👍
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Thanks!
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Wow! This so rhythmic and heartfelt!! Love it💖
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Thank you so much jahnavi♡
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You are the nerdy one aren’t you? I have made such a promise with one of my friends too.. i absolutely love this poem and relate to it😭💜
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Yes😅
Aw, i am glad you do🧡
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Cute poem Akshita!😃❤
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Thank you!
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