
I saw a mirror in your eyes Stumbling in was paradise A belief of love; capsuled with forever Beckoned me and I got carried away And there it was the hidden chest Forbidden from all the rest Opening it was crashing down In a deep stumbling mess, I drowned Like a moth is to flame You came to me with all the blame And fired your fiery arrows Yet calling out to you was easy Pretending even more so Your blind trust and my waiting patience Made for your journey to hell And for my eyes to reflect heaven You never saw the black lies In your white glass But I held your eyes As you fell Saw them switching emotions Surprise, guilt, love And then a disturbing stillness; I loved, But to love is to destroy
I was listening to a Taylor Swift song when the ides of writing this came to me. Can you guess the song?
Also, this piece seems to have different meanings as soon as you change the perspective. What’s yours? Tell me in the comments!
Have a nice day!
This is truly a deep and powerful poem! A lovely read💖
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Thank you so much!!
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AKSHITA!! THIS IS OFFICIALLY MY NEW MOST-FAVORITE-EVER POEM OF YOURS!!!!! HOW ARE ALL OF THEM SUCH PERFECTION??????? REVEAL YOUR SECRETS?? THIS ONE IS SO BEAUTIFUL AND GORGEOUS I AM OBSESSED 😭😭
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THANK YOU, THAT MEANS SO MUCH TO ME😭❤
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This is so beautiful!! You’ve definitely got a way with words!!
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Thank youu😊😊
Hey, can you send me your blog link? I can’t open it from your profile😕
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Hey! Sure, I will check why it’s not working…
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Cool thx!
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😊
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AHHH THIS WAS AMAZING!!! I loved it so so much💫💖
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Thank youuu!!
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omg the poem touched me, and its really filled with emotions and totally a touching poem for me. its true tho. – “I didnt know if you were the devil or the angel, yet I just knew you were like a broken frame. you were gone and it was painful, but I just kept loving you waiting for you but you never came”
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Thank you!
Oh wow, did you write that?
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Umm yea😂
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That was realllyy good
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thnkuu
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Wow, this was such a beautiful poem!
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Thanks!!
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Ah Yes How LoVE Rises
And Falls And Oh Yes
How Often Creativity
And Feelings Are Sparked
Most in the Precipice
Tween Heaven
And Hell
Falling
And Rising
Love’s Roller Coaster
Brings Farther Distance
More Feelings DarK Thru LiGHT
Yet Again the
Precipice
Tween
Most
Fertile
Ground
For Creativity
in Art to Rise and
Of Course Taylor Swift
Works Charms of Her
Art ThiS Way
Dear Akshita
With Smiles..:)
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True that sir. We never know what might inspire us
Thanks for reading !
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Yes! Thank You😊
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What a beautifully written poem Akshita!
Love her/ love you 😘
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Thank you!❤✨
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A song can be a wonderful inspiration to pen a beautiful poem. Nice one Akshita
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Thank you so much 🖤
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beautiful one aksh! songs can indeed bring forth ideas to write!
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Indeed, thank you!🖤✨
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Beautiful poem Akshita
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Thank you!
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