Alone at the edge of the universe,
Humming a tune unlearnt, unheard
A melody of my own
Stretches far, seeking home
A soul to affect, a voice to compliment
The notes sway and pray for a human shell
Renounced, they bounce back off surfaces
Not allowed to penetrate
Still the wind carries them in whispers
Hopeful, Sensitive, Relentless
A forage in vain, they return
Wanting love, understanding they couldn’t discern
Pure apathy from a busy life
Depths of debts from helpless heights
That was when they hit me
Right where rested my heart
I let them in
And that’s when the notes,
Erupted into a melody
So yeah, that just happened.
Credits to Dream Sweet in Sea Major by Miracle Musical for the first line. I was made aware of this lyric by an irl friend
Is this way to cryptic? Or can you interpret it? Tell me soon!
Have a great day!!
Anthology of Akshita's Thoughts 
I love the ending Akshita! There are so many beautiful lines In the poem
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I am glad you think so!
Thank you so much ✨🖤
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AHHH I ADORE THIS!!! it’s so beautiful and well written!!💖💖💖
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Thank you so much 🖤✨
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HAVE I SAID HOW MUCH I ADORE YOUR WRITING? BECAUSE I DO. VERY MUCH 😭
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Aw, thank you soooo much! That means a lot to me❤
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I love this Ashkita!
It’s fabulous.
Love this line “Still the wind carries them in whispers”
And the ending rock! 💕🙌
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I am so glad to hear that, thank you so much auntie ❤✨
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You’re soooo welcome my dearest niece!! 💖
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NO BUT HAVE I EVER MENTIONED YOUR POEMS ARE LITERALLY ONE OF THE MOST BEAUTIFUL EVER??? 😭😭 I LOVE THEM ALL SO MUCH AND AM IN AWE OF YOUR WRITING BASICALLY
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Oh god Anoushka, every time I post something you leave these wonderful comments that instantly make me smile, so thank you sooo much❤✨
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🥺❤❤
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Wow, Akshita! I have been trying to write a poem similar to this one for a while now, but you have captured this wonderfully. Sometimes we don’t realise how wonderful we truly are.
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Nonetheless, you must share it someday!
Thank you so much bree! And what you say is so very true♡
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SMiLes Dear Akshita to Explore
With Curiosity Is to Find Answers
Yet to Explore With Wonder is to
Open Up All New
Worlds of Art
As Yes Your Soul
Is Singing Free HeaR
Remember ‘Reason’ Is About
5 Percent of our Mind the 95 to
Even 99 Percent is Art Just Waiting
To Come out in Flow
of Free Creativity
Just As You Do Today
And True THere Could
Be As Many Meanings As
There are Eyes and Ears of
Imagination And Creativity Reading
And This is Key
To Evolve A Soul
In Creating More Than
Just Data Download From
Work and School my FRiEnD
As I surely Did That for 5.3 Decades or So too…
Now i Flow Now i Explore Wonder For What i See
You Doing
HeaR
Just Setting
Your Wings Free
No Need to Worry
How You Fly As Long
As You Do With SMiLes..:)
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That is a beautiful way to see it sir
Thank you so much for these words:)
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You Are Very Welcome
Akshita Thanks For
Inspiring Words
Of my Soul
With
Your
Free
SouLeD Poetry😊🙌
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