
I pledge fealty to a dream,
That was seen along this flag
A cloth imbibed with hope
And tarnished with fear
Bloodied by necessity
Sworn to bravery
Countless men, women
Have grieved, fought, bled and died
To keep our tattered dreams alive
Not to glorify a symbol
But defend an idea, an ideal
Helping us still dream
Of a better today and utopian future
This flag soaring today
It does not shine, it basks in our glory
It does not weep, it needs our tears
It does not smile, it needs our mirth
It does not fly, it needs our wings
It does not grow, it needs our progress
It does not speak, it needs our voice
It must not mourn, the dreamers
No more should it see discrimination
No more should it see intolerance
No more should it see a regional gloom
No more should it see societal fray
No more should it have fantasts,
Submerged in corrupted waters
Let us swear allegiance
To this chance of dreaming
Let us swear allegiance
To a goal once set, and the ones we set today
I wrote this poem long ago for independence day and while I do realize I might just be like a month too late in posting this, I still wanted to share it
Hope you like it!
Have a nice day!!
Beautiful poem Akshita! Well penned!
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Thanks starr!!
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Wow. this is a great poem!!
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And happy belated independence day!
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Thankssss
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lovely!!
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ok but THIS IS BASICALLY GROUNDBREAKING LEVELS OF PHENOMENAL AND IM OBSESSED LIKE THAT??? ALSO LOVE IT SO SO MUCH its so incredibly beautiful 😭 like, all the lines ARE JUST STUNNING AND I COULD NEVER CHOOSE FAVORITES THEYRE ALL SO SO BEAUTIFUL I LOVE SO MUCH
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Have i ever told you how much i love reading your comments??? They make my dayy
thank you so muchhhhh
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I could almost feel myself reciting this poem at an independence day program 🤩😂.
This was so good! I wish I could write something that patriotic and deep about my country. I loved this line- This flag soaring today
It does not shine, it basks in our glory.
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I did recite this in my school’s independence day program you know😂
and i am glad you did:)))
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😂😂 omg that’s why it gave those vibes
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This is such a lovely poem. Loved it
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Thank youuu!
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So True Dear Akshita As Any Symbol
Humans Co-Create From All Words to All Other Tools
of Culture The Symbols Are Only Alive AS Humanity
As Essence
Holding Up
The Symbol the Flag..:)
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True that
Thank you so much!
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Welcome
With SMiles
Thank You😊
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