‘Tis every kid’s favourite
A widely known fairy tale
Come with me, let me tell you
My version of this famous tale
Cindy was mopping the ground
With a stoic face, inside she frowned
While the ugly sisters hopped, happy and gay
Making the floor dirty all the way
That’s when the letter came
From the royal palace, much famed
An invitation to the royal ball
Where the prince’ll choose his bride, for once and all
Cindy lay rotting in the dark celler
While the sisters wore bangles from the bangle seller
Then the sisters went to the palace to greet
As mouse nibbled at Cindy’s feet
This is just so unfair
Cried poor Cindy mighty and fair
I need a dress blue and gay
Covered in sparkles all the way
A sword with a scabbard brand new
Covered in gemstones, a few
Silver slippers, two of those
And a nice pantyhose
Came the godmother, wicked her wand
And Cindy arrived at the ball so grand
The sisters inwardly cringed
To see Cindy with the prince
The clock struck 12, Cindy cried, “Heck”
I need to leave to save my neck
She ran away leaving behind her slipper
And the prince became its keeper
He then announced in a booming voice
The owner of this shoe is my choice
One of the sisters grew jealous
And did a deed which proved callous
She replaced the shoe with a clone
With one that she owned
The next day the town was searched
Spectators watched, even the birds that were perched
Finally they came to Cindy’s house
With the prince’s trial to find his spouse
The sister tried, the shoe it fit
In shock, on the ground, the prince did spit
A slash of his sword followed
And her head rolled down the road
The other one said,” Now I’ll try the shoe”
She lay dead too
Now Cindy came outside
Her sword explored the Prince’s inside
An undercover spy on the run
She killed the men who killed for fun
The sister’s death was justified too
For they had killed her Mother Number2
Duuuuuudddeeeee that was WICKED (in Ron Weasley voice) loved it!!!!! You were right XD. The original one gets on my nerves.
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Heee heee heeee
Thank you!!!❤
I have written more retellings. Read them when you have time!!
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Yeah sure!!
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❤✨
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Nice idea of re-telling.. good twist at the end..
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Thank you so much for stopping by😊
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That’s different…Well written …🙂
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Thank you so much!😊💐
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I love this! What a creative idea👌
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Thank you so much!!
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I like this version.
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Happy to know that 😊☘
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This is fair enough, to kill the prince for her sisters. Wonderful as always, Akshita!
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Thank you so much! Glad you like it 😊💐
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My pleasure! 🙂
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no words required to appreciate- perfect🧡💛💚💜🤎🖤🤍
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Thank you soooo much!! This really means a lot🤗♥️
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That was incredibly beautiful ❤️❤️
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Thank you so much for your appreciation!😊💐
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Truly incredible!
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Thanks a lot! Glad you like it 😊💐
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That was WOW!!
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Thank you so much!!😊
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My pleasure 😇 and hope you’re having a wonderful day!
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I am. Hope the same for you💐
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Oh. That’s a great re-telling, Akshita. I really liked it. And I have nominated you for a “10 of my favourite things” tag. Do check it out. I would love to read your list too! 🙂
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Thanks a lot! Glad you like it 💐
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My pleasure 😊
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Incredible. Love it 🙂
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Thanks a lot ma’am!😊💐
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Nice 😊
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Thank you so much!
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Wow! Amazing🌸
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Thanks a lot for your appreciation 😊💐
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My pleasure🌺🌸
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Awesome!!! I could imagine the animated form of your narration!
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Thank you so much! I am so happy to know that 😊💐
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😊😊
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Absolutely well written.
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Thanks a lot!😊💐
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Beautiful!!🌈
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Thanks a lot 💐😊
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Ok… definitely different! 😄🙏
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Thanks a lot! Glad you found it to be so💐😊
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❤️🌷👌🙏
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Oh, wow!!!! ❣
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Thank you so much for your appreciation 😊💐
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My pleasure 🤗🤗
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My favorite princess!❣
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Thanks for reading 😊💐
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No problem!
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Loved it! ❤❤
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Thanks a lot! I am glad you loved it😊💐
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