I woke up to see
The sky with the stars
Glowing as the fall
I wanted them to find me
As I awaken
I am carried by that glow
And I long for that flame
In it I want to be taken
I feel like a moth drawn to it
Yet it doesn’t come near
I want it to find me, burn within me
Yet the flame remains in the sky, lit
Its all made of light
Oh, how I long for the flame to find me
It still remains there
Burning bright
It strikes me now, fully
I already have the flame
The journey was always to discover the flame hidden within
I awaken truly
This is so so beautiful, I absolutely love it 🖤🖤
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Thank you dear Ace!!
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Do you write all of these yourself?
If yes,how do you come up with such great stuff?
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Yes, these are all original
Ahh *blushes intensely* I just try to think about what I am feeling or what I am and try to versify that
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**stands up**
👏👏👏👏
You rock girl😁👏🌹
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😍😘👍🏻👌🏻
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😊😊
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Oh my God, this is so beautiful!!! The journey inwards is blissful and you have described it so well!! Very well done Akshita, loved this!!! absolutely !!!
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Thank you so much, HS!!
This comment made my day!! Thanks for being such a constant viewer🤗🤗💐💐💐💐
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My pleasure, always 😇
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At times, we fail to identify the flame when it gets dimmer. But, it always keeps burning within. Well written, Akshita!
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True that.
Thank you so much!!😊
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“The journey was always to discover the flame hidden within”…..so true…only very few realise this. Beautiful composition Akshita ❤️
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Exactly, we all need to know this
Thank you so much ma’am 😊💐
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Aww… One of your best poems dear Akshita. 😍😍 Loved the ending! Keep up the great work 👏👏👏
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Thank you so much, Preeths!! 🤗🤗💐💐
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Omg the ending!!! Love this poem so much, Akshita!!!!!!!!!!!! We waste so much time looking for pleasures outside while it’s all inside us. Amazing work this is, my friend 😍😍😍
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Thank you so much, Rishika!!🤗🤗
Exactly, the journey’s always about to discover that which is inside us already..
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🤗✨
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Wow! This 1 was really cool! Loved it!!!!❤
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Thank you so much!!
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This is beautiful
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Thank you!
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Beautiful imagery:) The picture goes well with your lines❤😊
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Thank you so much!!
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“Flame Lives Within”
Beautiful Akshita
Although
Often
Hidden
Stars We Seek
Find Within
Coloring Our
Space
Of Heavens Real 🌌
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Absolutely true!
Thank you so much!!😊😊
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SMiles Welcome
Akshita Thanks!😊
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Nice one!!
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Thank you!
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beautiful Akshita!💖
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Thanks a lot for your constant support!!🤗🤗
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It’s an honor-:)💕
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Beautifully expressed….
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Thank you so much!😄
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You’re welcome!
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❤❤❤
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😊😊😊
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Beautifully said 👏👏
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Thank you!
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👏🏽👏🏽
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😊💐
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This one was soo lyrical❤️
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Thanks you so much !!
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