I guess I never really knew you
I guess I never really understood you
I guess you never really found me
I guess you never really wanted to know me
And I guess you never really wanted to understand me
I guess you always hid from me
I guess you were afraid of me
I guess I was scared to find you
I guess I never knew you were there
And I guess I am not the one for you
It hurts to say this
But you is me
And me is you
And yet we know nothing of each other
How much do we allow ourselves to know ourselves?
Wow that is so deep and beautiful! Well penned!!!
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Thank you stara!!😊✨
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Lovely poem . Special love for last lines
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Thank youuu!
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Mind blowing ❤❤
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Thanks!!🤗
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Ooohf right in the feels ak! ✨
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Thanks!!
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Amazing!! I loved every line ❤️
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Thank you so much 💐❤
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Hey, Akshita! Since your article is getting published in the CauseBecause magazine (it was the prize for a bonus winner), may I know your grade and state to include in there?
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Is it really necessary to give that? I am not really comfortable sharing any personal info online..
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Okay, then it’s fine. (:
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Thanks🤗
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Such an self-introspective post!
Loved the end especially, didn’t expect that coming. 😇👏🏻
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Thank you so much di!!💖
Touched to see this comment🤗
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Hi Akshita,
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Oh the end…. I first thought it was about someone! 😃😃 Brilliant write dear Akshita. 👏👏
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Thanks dear💕
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Ooh this is Soo emotional m deep! Well done Akshita! ❤️❤️😊
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Thank you Anushka!😊❤
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I’m grateful for this poem. The end got me. Do I really know myself? To what extent? It’s not too late to begin to take a few minutes a day to pay attention to self.
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I am glad to hear that
Yes we should really have a few moments of self-reflection
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❤️❤️❤️ lovely 👍👍👍
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Thank you so much🖤
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This was so deep and true!!
Good work 😀
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Thank you!
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😀
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Brilliant piece, Akshita! ❤
In the beginning, I related it with a lost friend. The closing lines were great. I second your thoughts. At times, we do not know much about ourselves as we think we know. The scales differ. It can be capabilities, our cognition or any other aspects.
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Thank you so much!!🖤(●’◡’●)
Exactly so. Its like not seeing myself, not knowing myself for who I am
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This piece of yours is beautifully expressed….stunning…
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Thank you so much!😄😄
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You’re welcome Akshita 💫
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lovely poem and Akshita……. cant wait to hear the sequel!💖
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Oh thank you so much auntie!! There might be a sequel😃
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ooooohhhh I’ll be waiting my sweet💖❣️
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Heartbreaking yet beautiful.
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Thanks poorwa!!😊
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SMiles Dear Akshita
Contemplating
Soul Reflecting
H U M A N i T Y
What Modern
Work A Day World
Takes From Humanity
Most Whole Complete
Enough
Without All
The External
Carrots
Sticks
Deadlines
Sidewalks Without
Meadows Dancing
Singing Free Within
Others Basically Living
Dead What Price What
Insanity
Really
Is So-Called
Civilization to Machine…
“SAiL On LoVE NoW”
Love Sold Lost All
CoNuNDRuM
CLoWN
SHoW
CiRCuS PLaY🤡
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True that
Thanks for reading and sharing your valuable views!!
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Welcome! As Always
Thanks for Your
Inspiring Poetry😊
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😊😊🌼🌼
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😃
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Wow! This is amazing!
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Thank you!
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Such a beautiful use of anaphora, y out blog is getting to a whole new level!
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Thank you so much arnav!
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Wow..! My dear friend..! This is fantastic..! Such a powerful piece..! Excellent write..!❤️🤗
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Thank you dearie😊
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My pleasure dear..!
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So cleverly written Akshita 👌
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Thanks Bree!!😊
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Oh god, so dark!! But great!
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Thank you Nehal!!
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Amazing lines👌
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Thanks!
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Very nice this 🙂
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Thank you!
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Welcome 🙂
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This is such a nice work Akshita
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Thanks 😊
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Such an amazing peice! I can relate to this… I love each and every line you’ve written. Immaculate! 💖💖
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Thank you so much geet!😊
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Deep
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Thanks!
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Oh wow. I didn’t know that it was not about another person. Sometimes, we realise that we don’t really know ourselves as much as we think. Beautifully written, Aksh ❤️
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Thank you so much di!!😊
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My pleasure 🤗😊
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Wow wow wow, this is just stunning. I can totally relate to this and I truly love every single word. Thank you for this perfect piece, such a gift. Fantastically done 🖤🖤
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Thank you so much ace!!😊
Love you for that!
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Wow AK17! This is amazing. Reminds me of friends who are no longer friends. I love how everyone can relate to this with someone who mattered in their life. Good job!
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Thank you so much Sep!!😊
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Wow, this is such an amazing poem! I didn’t expect the ending. I thought it was about a lover, but I loved how you ended it with the poem being about ourselves.
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My thoughts exactly. This is Awesome Akshita💜
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Thank you Sab!😊
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Pleasure😁
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Thank you so much Isha!!😊
So happy to hear that
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Most welcome🥰
On a side note, it feels strange to be called Isha😂😂
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😂😂 good kinda strange i hope
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Yes yes😆
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😁😁😁
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