Part 1:

Chloe was the typical teen you’d find
Clumsy, worried, a bit kind
Sailing through school somehow
Sitting in classes with a permanent frown
She busied herself in books
Didn’t care much about her looks
But, here’s a secret let me tell you
She’ll surely care very soon
One day, she went to separate old books
Quite some time it took
When, she suddenly stumbled upon one beside her bed
“Twelve Dancing Princesses”, the title read
She opened the book to see dainty gowns
And palaces and market towns
Her mother called her downstairs
She stumbles, RIP, flat on her face
She wakes up on king size bed
With a large canopy, with flowers fed
She tried to wake up from her dream
But it wasn’t one, I swear on my esteem
“Lady, lady wake up now,
You had banged your head with a booming ‘OWWW’,
It’s been hours though, and you look fine,
Come down for dinner, its quesadilla and wine”
“Who are you”, confused Chloe asked
The other lady’s face masked
“Oh my, you banged your head quite bad,
You’ve forgot your lady’s maid, that’s sad”
That’s just when a regal looking lady entered
“Oh! The lump on your head is quite centred,
But don’t worry Claire you’ll be okay,
Mother will surely find a way”
“Who’s this Claire, who are you?”
“Oh my! You forgot your queen and mother too!”
Just then, Chloe saw an apparition
That gave her few serious instructions
“You ripped the page of a book, activated a curse
You are now in this story, that’s quite adverse
You need to complete it till the very end
But it’s not the original one, there are twists, turns and bends
You won’t dance, you’d fight for your life
You are one of those 12 now, you’re Claire in this life
Once you have done so, you’ll be free
To go back to your home with a lot of glee”
THE END
A very interesting read! Can’t wait for the next blog!
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Thanks a lot!! The next parts have already been posted. Do read it sometime ✌
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Beautifully written. A very innovative poem.
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Thanks a lot! Do read the other parts✌
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Nicely written💛. I really love to read it.
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Thank you so much. Do read the other parts
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Woah! That’s amazing and innovative 😁
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Thank you so much😊💐
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You’ve built an interesting plot to retell the story!
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Thank you!!
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Beautiful!!
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Thank you✨
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Wow, amazing it is. 😍
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Thank you so much! 😊✨
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Wow definitely a new favourite!! I’m loving the twist and rhymes and can’t wait to see what she does next!! 😍😍😍
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Thank you so much!! Will post the next part soon✨
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Wow Akshi!! I’m eagerly waiting for the next part!!🤗🤩
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Thanks a lot✨
Will be out soon👍
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So creative!!!!! I loved it soo much❤❤❤
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Thank you so much✨
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😊
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Amazing 🤘
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Thanks a lot!!
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Hey there!!!!
I have nominated you for “sunshine blogger award”.
Check my recent post.
And do the necessary formalities. 😉🤗
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Appreciate your imagination! 👏
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Thank you so much!!
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wow 💙
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Thanks a lott!!✨
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my pleasure ☺☺
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wowowowowow! loved this!!!!
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Thank you soooo muuch!!
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What an artful poem! Loved it. 😊👏🌸
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Thank you sooo much!!
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
RHYMETIME IN AN ALTERNATIVE UNIVERSE! 😀
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Thanks!!
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YUPPERS
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Ohh, I loved your imagination. Great job, Akshita ♥️
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Thank you so much!
I am glad you did😊✨
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Wow! What an imagination!!Beautifully written..
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Thank you so much 😊
I am glad you liked it✨
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