When you’re suffering from a problem
And you need help; that’s said
People, wanted or unwanted
Come to your aid
You are huddled inside a room
With those people filled in
And all at once they start
Begrudgingly, talking
They hurl advices and suggestions
Which you’ve listened to a hundered times
And what you did wrong and how to do it
Is thrown at you like dimes
You’re stuck in there
Talk and talk is all they do
You are supposed to listen to it all
‘Cause they know what’s best for you
I don’t know why they don’t understand
Even after years
That what we need isn’t a talking mouth
But, just a listening ear
Ahh this is so true! I love this!!! Awesome poem! I’m enjoying exploring through your writings š
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Thank youuuuuu!! Means a lotā¤
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Ugh, I know right! Sometimes we just need that shoulder to cry on, and people keep telling us to “be happy” and “rote kyu ho, kush raho” as if we can seriously control it, as if it’s in our hands š.
Amazing poem as always!!
Your posts didn’t show on my reader š. Stupid wp š
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I know right!!
It feels so frustrating to hear that phraseš
Thank you!
Ahh that’s happening a lot. I guess you can unfollow and follow again
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Yeah ok, I’ll do that
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So true. Such a lovely piece. ā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļø
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Thank you!š¤š¤
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Absolutely true! I’ve experienced this many times. Well written! š
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We all have. Thank you!
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So true! A commendable poem with deep expression! Keep it up
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Thank you so much, Arnav!! Glad you like it:)
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Oh man….. Only if everyone can understand this, life would be more happier!!! Beautiful write dear Akshita. ā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļø
Btw…. For some reason your posts doesn’t pop up in my readers list. And I end up missing your posts. So here I unfollow and follow you back… Will see if it can be fixed!!
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Thank you so much, Preeths!!āØ
If that does not help, maybe you could turn on the notifications while following
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Oh… Will go check right away. I am hoping it’s already on. But let me give a second check. Thank you dear for the support, I really appreciate š„°š„°
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You’re welcome:))
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Oh man…. That ending!!! Is it just me or you execute the endings PERFECTLY in your poems.
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Thank you, thank you š
Riding high with that comment
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and that maka’s me CRAZY!!!!! ā£ļøā£ļøwell saidšššš
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And me tooo!!
Thank you!!š
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Great minds think alikeā£ļøā£ļøā£ļø welcomeā£ļø
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Oh this is so true! People and their unwanted advices. All we need is a helpful and willing ear. Nailed it, Akshita!
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Thank you!!
I missed your comments on my blogš
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Sorry about that. Now that I am back, I’ll make sure to comment every time š
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No need to be sorryā
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So true. Sometimes we should listen to what the other person wants to tell.
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Exactly
The art of listening is missing in most people these days
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you are lucky if u have people around u who can lend their ear to help u. cherish them. much love š
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That’s true. People don’t really realise that.
To you as wellš
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This is so beautiful and deeply true. Amazing piece, my friend! Your writing is always sublime š¤š¤
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Thank you so much, Ace!!š
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Yeah Us Men Are
Notorious For
Trying to Fix
Feelings
Like An
Automobile
And Iām Not Even
Good At Repairing
Cars Akshita With SMilesš
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Haha, we all are
Thanks!!
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ššāļøSMiles
Thank You!
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Damn the ending!!!!!!!!!!!!
āAnd what you did wrong and how to do it
Is thrown at you like dimesā
I felt this so much, Akshita, this is probably my favourite piece by you!!
And if you ever need a listening ear, Iām here š¤
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Thank you so much, Rish(can I call you that?)
You made my day with that commentš¤š
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Akshita… wow that ending. I adore this piece of powerful writing!
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Thank you so much, Bree!!!
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There are very few who actually listen without imposing their opinions or judgments. Well penned!
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Indeed.
Thank you š
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Wow. This is soo trueee…! Well crafted in this way ā¤ļøā¤ļø
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Thank you so much!!!
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Welcome š
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Yes. So true ak! All we need is to be heard. š„ŗā¤ļø
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True. Sometimes all those opinions just anger us.
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Ikr!!! And look at genius me š I have commented but I forgot to like the post š¤¦
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Glad you agree!!
Happens with me tooš¬š¬
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This one has all my heart ā¤ ā„ feels very relatable
Great job ššš
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Thank you so much!!š
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The last lineš„š„
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Thank you!š
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This is so true!
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Glad you agree!!
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That’s always fascinating that they knew what best for us, even more than us and sometimes I laugh at them off
And when they advise on something of which they have slightest of the idea, I was like, what š®š®, well, what to say
Loved the last part
Its amazing as always šš
Take care š¤
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Ikr. They just have to speak for the sake of speaking. You know, Empty vessels sound muchšāāļø
Thank you so much!!
You too take careš¤š
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Yup, exactly
Pleasure always šš
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True!!! This is so good šš»
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Thank you so much!!
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Yes akshita! This is true.. and the last line hit hard.. very amazing piece! Hope you are doing good.. hoping you have a blessed and happy day my friend!š¤š¤š¤š¤š
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Thank you, Fil (can I call you that?)
You too have a great day and week!!š¤
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Yeah! Sure, my friend! Most welcome dear akshita! It’s my pleasure!š¤š
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So relatable Akshita. Specially true for Indians who always have to give their opinion and advice on every thing that you do or don’t do š
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True that. They are all self-declared experts
Glad you relate!
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I’m stupefied….this is soo good!
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Thanks a lot!!š
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Ahh! The last line hit hardš¤
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Thank you !
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The last two lines were bang on! Loved this pieceā£ā£
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Thank you, Ishita!!š
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This can’t be more true…
Enjoyed reading it šš
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Thank you so much!+
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