Everyone says, don’t care
People always and come and go
But, how can I stop thinking about someone
Who has been inside me, forever, who left me alone?
How can I forget someone,
Who has been with me since I know of?
What can I do to forget my own past?
How can I forget who I once was?
The bubbly happy girl, always positive
Nothing on her brain, just small things
Not thinking about the problem
She would have to deal with, first thing in the morning
It’s funny how I wanted to be older as a kid
And now all I want is to be a kid again
Maybe if I sit in the rain right now
I can drown in something
Other than my nemesis,
Other than my own thoughts
And so deeeeeeeeeeep!
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Thaaanks!!
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What a lovely well written poem!!
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Thank you so much!!
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Amazing 🤩👍
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Thank you!
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wow this is soo deep and beautiful😊😊❤️❤️❤️ Thats actually a good message…
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thank you anushka!!🥰🥰
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your welcome😊
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ah those last few lines are everything!! it is so true though. it’s ironic truly how we keep wishing for the past to just erase itself when it is what makes us, us. and if it truly is erased maybe we will be erased with it. lovely post ak!
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Truee that!
Its probably the past that makes us what we are today
(Totally out of topic but as soon as you mentioned we may be erased with it, I suddenly recalled avengers endgame. Remember how nebula killed the old nebula? I still think how the new nebual survived coz she just killed herself in the past..)
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After a while, we get used to this too…
Brilliantly worded piece 👏🏻❤️
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truee
Thank you so much!!
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So dark and deep, being an adult you can do anything you want. Being a kid, everyone bosses you around, being a kid is so tough exams getting scolding for silly reasons, gosh so tough
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Exams are the worst
It feels like being an adult is easy but right now only I feel like growing up is tough and I am few years away from adulthood.
I suppose you are younger than me then😅 enjoy life rn
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This is so achingly beautiful, Akshita 💓
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Thank you so much!!
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This is beautiful and so relatable. Growing up sucks but its amazing to look back and see how much you have changed, we all lose bits and pieces of ourselves along the way but we also gain a lot.
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True that. You can actually think how you woild have reacted if you were the same person as before
Thank you!!
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It happens. As a kid, you want to be an adult soon and when you become an adult, you want to be a kid again because you realize that as a kid there was more fun and fewer worries in life.
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Exactly so! we always want to get rid of that stage of life
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Beautiful Aksh! I thought you were talking about a best friend at first. But talking about you’re childhood self made it even better!
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Thank you Panna!!
Tbh, i was first writing about a best friend but then i got this idea 😀
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Also panna, i am still thinking about what to give for your magazine. I had this idea. How about I ask people for book recommendations and I’ll dedicate songs to them. Would you want that? Otherwise I’d try and write a poem..
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Nah, it’s done for the month. You can always send it in tho. I’ll use it for the November issue. And my magazine is not like rayna’s. It’ll only be poems, write ups, quotes and letters.
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oh i thought the end date was 28th september. My exams just ended so I didn’t have much time. Sorry for this time
Okay, next time for sure
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Yes it was. But I got so many already. So yeah, I knew it was exam time. DW, but I will be waiting for your Aksh!!!!!!!!!!!!! Yeah, I’ve got no shame 🙂 I’m begging you to send one of your awe-mazing works!
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Hehe thaanksss!
And I have no shame in asking you to accept my work for your awe-mazing magazine!!😁😁
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I accept everything. Soo😂
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Ooh, my bad then😅😂
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it is well penned. Either way past never leaves us and also prevents us from moving forward!
if we keep living in the happiness of our past will we await the happiness of any ‘future’ as such?
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deeply felt this poem in every qway!
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thank youu!
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Thanks!
indeed. the past is hard to get rid of
exactly!!
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Every word you have written is accurate! I don’t know how people cope, or I should say get rid of their past. I never had that courage to move on. I am still repeatedly get hurt from my past experiences. I know there is a lot of literature, even more people to teach you to forget your past. However, I think, when the past decides to tinge on you, it certainly will. No matter how much you have trained yourself not to feel that way.
It is evident for humans. We desperately want to be older during childhood, and after becoming one, we regret to waste that precious childhood. Actually, we just try to run from our obligations of a particular stage of life. That’s true!!!
Well, it’s a good composition.
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Ikr, same for me. Its hard to get over past events and not be sad about it.
exactly, we always want to run away from life.
Thank you!
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This is sososososo true AK17! And such pretty composition!
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Thank you Sep!!
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Those last four lines are 👌
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thank youu!!!
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Harvesting A Net of Thoughts
Spiraling Never Ending
Nautilus of Reproducing
Words So How Shall A
Hurricane Blow Greater Winds
In Focus How Shall A Galaxy
Spread Its Arms Perfecting
Balance As Only A Practice
Of Existence Now Yes
Calm Center Grace
The Eyes of A Child
Unfolding Free to Absorb
Whatever Springs next to Flower
or Challenge Life Where Will We Go
Next
Wind
Will Direct Us
From Rags to
Riches Within Again…
Dear Akshita With SMiLes..:)
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true sir! things can always change for the better
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Yes…
Always
Dear Akshita
Changing Now😊
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Damn!!! ❤️
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Thanks!
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Beautifully poignant 💔💔
I am sure everyone wants that innocent life back. Well penned dear Akshita. 👏👏👏
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Thank you preeths!!
Truee that
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The last 2 lines are🔥🔥🔥
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Thank you!!
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Amazingly written, my friend. I totally relate and I love how vividly you described the emotion! Well done as always 🖤🤗
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Thank you so much Ace! Your comments always make me smile 😀
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That is so true and relatable. So heartfelt. Loved it!!❤
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Thank you so much!!
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Gosh, so dark, and so so relatable 😭😭😍
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Thanks mistress apple😭 I am honored again that you relate😍
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Oh how about apple pie
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Apple head
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Good ideas😂
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Woahhh that’s soo true! I really want to become smaller and enjoy the life I had then. ☹
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HI5! Ikr, life was wayy easier☹
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This is so true
I want to age backwards aaah
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Me too kim, me too!
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So true! All through my childhood I couldn’t wait to be an adult. And now..sigh!
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sameee! I always wanted to grow up and all but mow it feels like too much of a headache
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