Under the moon, as she gazed at stars
She found eyes gazing at her
Unwaveringly, deeply, with pools of memories
She raised her eyebrows at his trance
He moved closer; eyes unflinching
“I am gazing at your soul,
At all the infinities you hold within
Amongst the forced laughter
I find a love so powerful
It outshines the stars you see
You are the night
That holds the crucible to my stars
My dreams entangled in yours
You hold the storm within
That rages to take me inside
And make me forget
I can rest my weariness in you
And you would accept like you accept my spring
You hold my tears like dewdrops
At the dawn of a new longing.
You, will always outshine those stars, you see”
Watery smiles under the moonlit sky
Made the night sparkle with enchantments
The wind then carried her soft whisper,
“ It is because the parts you which no one understood,
Found the parts of me which no one wanted.”
I actually wrote this for Sim’s (@Far From Perfect) Shades of Love series. Decided to share it here too
Have a nice day!
‘You hold my tears like dewdrops’ this line is genius and wonderful, i love it i love the entire thing, amazing!! Permission to quote and use this line in my blog?
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Thank youuuuu!
Yes sure, i’ll be glad if you do
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This post is full of passion, love and acceptance. The last lines are awesome and take the whole poem to another new level.
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Thank you so much! Makes me so happy to know you thought so✨😊
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SMiLes Dear Akshita Indeed
Loved By Stars Above
Really No Substitute
For Stellar
Love For
Real mY FRiEnD
SMiLes Lovely
Mystical
Poem
About
RiSinG More
Than Falling iN LoVE..:)
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I am so happy to know you thought so
Thank you so much ✨😊
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Most Definitely
Welcome With
SMiles☺️🏝
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this is gorgeous my sweet Akshita!
💖💖💖🌻
“You hold my tears like dewdrops
At the dawn of a new longing.
You, will always outshine those stars, you see”
Watery smiles under the moonlit sky
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Oh thank you so much auntie!🧡✨
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Always!!!💖🌻🌻💖🌻
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Quite deep poem Akshita
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thank you!
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This was so good!
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Thank you!
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This is great. You articulated it so beautifully.
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i am so glad you think so:)
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Oooooooh damn dude how do you write so deep 😳. Those last two lines were beyond anything possible, i mean so deep wow 🥺🥺
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thaaaankkss mistress apple! you have besotted me with quite an honour with words like that
how was geo?
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😂 ur grammar
Yes geo was good lol
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Fie fie! We do not talk about that now😂
Yayy!
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🙄😂😂
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That last line 🥲🥲
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thank you<3
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Ahhhh I LOVE THIS SO SO SO MUCH 😭😭 I AM OBSESSED WITH THIS LINE ‘At the dawn of a new longing’ – IT’S SO BEAUTIFUL AND ALSO THE LAST TWO LINES AHHHH 😭❤️❤️❤️ HOW DO YOU WRITE SUCH AMAZING POEMS ALL THE TIME???? I AM SERIOUSLY IN AWE
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I am soo happy to hear that!
thank you soooooo much<3
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Ahhhh I LOVE THIS SO SO SO MUCH 😭😭 I AM OBSESSED WITH THIS LINE ‘At the dawn of a new longing’ – IT’S SO BEAUTIFUL AND ALSO THE LAST TWO LINES AHHHH 😭❤️❤️❤️ HOW DO YOU WRITE SUCH AMAZING POEMS ALL THE TIME???? I AM SERIOUSLY IN AWE
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Wow, romance to the max! Such a swoon-worthy piece Akshita 💜
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thank you bree!<3
means a lots coming from you
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